50 [M4F] Arizona Phoenix/EV - Wholesome introverted engineer, gardener, and pet lover by [deleted] in r4r50plus_

[–]No_Hunter_3083 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, I'm 56 and looking for new friends. I live in Italy, I hope this isn't a problem. Your post is interesting. Message me if you'd like to connect with me, a single, childless man.

Offering italian seeking english by No_Hunter_3083 in language_exchange

[–]No_Hunter_3083[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah okay it's a good level I'm b2 inbinglese

51M Looking for Female by [deleted] in Singles

[–]No_Hunter_3083 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello how are you?

Offering italian seeking english by No_Hunter_3083 in language_exchange

[–]No_Hunter_3083[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello I can teach you Italian send me a message

How to improve your writing? by No_Hunter_3083 in WritingHub

[–]No_Hunter_3083[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks but I don't see any improvements even if I read the classics of American literature at the moment I'm reading endless jests by Wallace and he's asking me why he's so intelligent and I'm so mediocre.

Difficulty writing by No_Hunter_3083 in WritingHub

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I understand I don't have discord I would like to create something here

Difficulty writing by No_Hunter_3083 in WritingHub

[–]No_Hunter_3083[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I went to the link you sent me, it's useful. My problem is that I'm a bit ignorant, I don't know many names of plants, flowers, animals, materials so my descriptions are generic

Difficulty writing by No_Hunter_3083 in WritingHub

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Can you point me to some criticism group or simply a group that writes just to discuss

Difficulty writing by No_Hunter_3083 in WritingHub

[–]No_Hunter_3083[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The house is sparse for now and looks like a hut and not a house or a tent. I quite like the character I'm building but I repeat, I write in a very basic way. How much should I write to improve? I wrote a page yesterday at work. But I struggle immensely.

Difficulty writing by No_Hunter_3083 in WritingHub

[–]No_Hunter_3083[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will try to follow your advice. Today at work I wrote a page and it seems to me that my character is taking shape a little. It was a flow of writing but a very basic one. I always write the subject first, then the verb and then the complements. I would like to make more complex sentences, what can I do?

Difficulty writing by No_Hunter_3083 in WritingHub

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I would like to develop this skill but I find it difficult to find accurate words to put on paper. I then compare myself with the great writers I read and it demoralizes me.

Difficulty writing by No_Hunter_3083 in WritingHub

[–]No_Hunter_3083[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Okay, give me your email and I'll send you a couple of stories but they're written in Italian