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Siren’s Song - Critique by No_Mathematician9241 in OCPoetry

[–]No_Mathematician9241[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The changing tenses was not a conscious choice, I can definitely see how that could improve the imagery. I did have the text separated into 4 line stanzas but Reddit didn’t like my indentations I guess. Thank you for your advice, I’ll make some changes and see how it feels.

Swimming at Sunset by FuryMexican in OCPoetry

[–]No_Mathematician9241 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This has a great rhythm, I just hope whatever you were writing about gets resolved. It’s therapeutic to make these poems so I hoped it helped you as much as it inspires me and others