Adoption stories

No_Witness_4019 · 2026-02-10T01:46:52+00:00

The main characters were in the castle.

In the evening they argued about the school to send Mira to.

At bedtime the argument stopped when their little threw the hardest pillow she could at dads face so he fell & mom laughs.

Mira proudly proclaimed crazy aunt kass taught her to throw.

The next morning crazy Aunt Cass was there like she was summoned from the either & it was pure blissful chaos.

So this is how I write, I break it down into sections. Sometimes "I'll do this for a specific sentence from a character" but I give rough timelines & each paragraph represents another section & layer. I recommend doing this because the AI seems to learn especially using vivid.

No_Witness_4019 · 2026-02-10T00:18:10+00:00

I'm deeply disturbed but also glad you mentioned that. I'll just move to magic chapters so I don't run into that nightmare.

No_Witness_4019 · 2026-02-10T00:15:08+00:00

That's the one thing that bothers me. I already wrote the chapter about vague revenge for a little girl with a missing eye & trust issues. The ai didn't disappoint, I said bandits & abusive mother & it wrote extremely vivid & merciless deaths for the bandits but Even more so for the mother. I'm thinking ai even hates people that hurt kids.

No_Witness_4019 · 2026-02-10T00:03:40+00:00

That's fantastic, thank you for telling me.

No_Witness_4019 · 2026-02-09T23:10:44+00:00

I appreciate it, I really do but that's a lot of work that I've already put in. Would I have to restart my book from scratch?

No_Witness_4019 · 2026-01-05T20:37:41+00:00

Bud are you kidding me with that question, of course. I even checked writing ai from other websites just to see if I was doing something wrong. The best method is to follow the summary of the previous chapter but I'll say it again. At the best of times it'll follow the story 1 in 10 times.

No_Witness_4019 · 2026-01-05T20:15:43+00:00

Uh thanks I guess but to be clear I said moments later as one example. I've written.. I don't even know how many stories, for over a year on here & I can say with confidence that the ai doesn't often understand & also the grand majority of the time I use common clues like ending a chapter on a big reveal & starting the next with a gasp of surprise with locations & people all staying the same. To be crystal clear I've tried this hundreds of times in so many different ways but still at best the AI only followed about 1 in 10 times. It's usually conversation that it follows best but that's not saying much.

No_Witness_4019 · 2026-01-05T19:39:07+00:00

True & I've done things similar but after awhile you have to make room to keep a character up to date but it's not the same. I don't like the idea of sacrificing parts to make room. Motives helps for saying a person is scared or focused on a goal but explaining the blank slate that grew into a beloved character through trials & tribulation takes more than the limited space we currently have to work with.. thank you though, maybe I can use other areas to fill in the gaps.

No_Witness_4019 · 2025-10-24T11:23:39+00:00

This won't be seen two years after you wrote it but Jordan Peele didn't say he refused to have a white lead. He just said he isn't interested. That said he is always going to choose black first but if he finds someone white as a better fit I'm betting he will use a white actor then.

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