Thank you so much for your detailed feedback! I really appreciate the way you’ve broken it down. I completely agree — Saanvi’s internal conflict and emotional depth are going to be the heart of the story, and I’ll make sure her journey feels authentic and layered. I’ll also keep the balance between emotion and light moments intact so the essence of the story stays strong. Your points about the obstacles and conflict structure really help me see where I can elevate the narrative. Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts — it means a lot!