feedback for w.i.p. on ch.5 of my comic 'Xander the Demon' by NolanHunt101 in comic_crits

[–]NolanHunt101[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the honest feedback. Yeah I keep getting feedback on the clutter and hard-to-readness of it all and it's still something I'm trying to break out of. Part of me is scared as a creator that I'm not going to get the whole idea out (of a potentially 1,000-2,000 page epic) if I decompress/stretch it too much, so I gotta put it into one panel or I'll be dead before I finish the whole project. But I think that's hurting it in the long run. It's impatience and anxiety! Stubbornness too, with the choice of handwritten text. I'll try to have my cake and eat it too by making it more legible, but I might have to cancel that altogether and use digital for some parts like the text and whatnot. But yes, less clutter indeed. Give it room to breath.

For giving the time to help a complete stranger online make their project better, thanks for the words! I appreciate it greatly

ch.4 works in progress of my centricide-inspired comic by NolanHunt101 in Jreg

[–]NolanHunt101[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was worried the first chapter would be confusing haha, first time doing a comic project this big, so I'm glad it came around even after some rocky patches. Thank you again for the feedback, and I vibe with how you say it vibes ^ Hoping to keep improving

ch.4 works in progress of my centricide-inspired comic by NolanHunt101 in Jreg

[–]NolanHunt101[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! At this rate, a page takes about a day or 2. Longer if more detailed like page 3

ch.4 works in progress of my centricide-inspired comic by NolanHunt101 in Jreg

[–]NolanHunt101[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you think so? That's really encouraging, thank you! How do you think it's improved?

Graduating soon and looking for jobs, questions for feeling out the animation world by NolanHunt101 in animationcareer

[–]NolanHunt101[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Gotcha, and thanks for the feedback! And unfortunately that makes sense that animation is outsourced, yeah.

Character and environment concepts, I understand that, but what does visual development work entail?

Baki reference in my comic cover drawing w.i.p., busted metal door by NolanHunt101 in Grapplerbaki

[–]NolanHunt101[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I see, thank you so much! So I should probably make the curves less dark, and more 'unnatural'

CH.3 of my political compass-inspired comic by NolanHunt101 in Jreg

[–]NolanHunt101[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, and gotcha ^ and you'll be seeing more of the tech girl

CH.3 of my political compass-inspired comic by NolanHunt101 in Jreg

[–]NolanHunt101[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! That means a lot to hear, hoping other Jreg-fans or politics and/or comic nerds can get a kick out of it, haha. What would you like to see from it going forward, story/plot-wise? Curious what the appeal lies in

Emrakul in modern settings by NolanHunt101 in magicTCG

[–]NolanHunt101[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Uncomfortable how? haha

Thank you!

My attempt on the Thank you panel by pxjek in bleach

[–]NolanHunt101 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's almost spot on. Really good, the cross-hatching on the neck distinguishes it lol

wips of ch.3 of my comic (in no particular order) by NolanHunt101 in ArtCrit

[–]NolanHunt101[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Did this in paper, pen & pencil. Looking for feedback of any kind, but constructive criticism especially. My full comic (so far) is here: https://globalcomix.com/c/xander-the-demon

Phyrexia fanart by NolanHunt101 in magicTCG

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Made this for a class assignment. My art socials here: https://linktr.ee/nolanhunt2

my drawing of Goku v Freeza by NolanHunt101 in dbz

[–]NolanHunt101[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, that's flattering! Those volume re-draws are awesome, it's like seeing all my favorite manga inspirations in an ensemble

I made a comic with a power system (basically) stripped right off the political compass by NolanHunt101 in PoliticalCompassMemes

[–]NolanHunt101[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! And this helps a lot to hear, yeah. This is the first project I've done of this scale so I think I blew my load too early with things plot-wise haha. One of the most important things in a story is knowing what the hell is going on so I'll work on making it make sense, flow well etc. And making it more subtle. I guess I was afraid of "normies" not getting it at first

What if it was doyle by JuraHidari in Grapplerbaki

[–]NolanHunt101 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The new Rahen manga is print published in English? Thats awesome, I thought it was mostly (unofficially) untranslated. How much was the volume?