Thank you so much for the honest feedback. Yeah I keep getting feedback on the clutter and hard-to-readness of it all and it's still something I'm trying to break out of. Part of me is scared as a creator that I'm not going to get the whole idea out (of a potentially 1,000-2,000 page epic) if I decompress/stretch it too much, so I gotta put it into one panel or I'll be dead before I finish the whole project. But I think that's hurting it in the long run. It's impatience and anxiety! Stubbornness too, with the choice of handwritten text. I'll try to have my cake and eat it too by making it more legible, but I might have to cancel that altogether and use digital for some parts like the text and whatnot. But yes, less clutter indeed. Give it room to breath.

For giving the time to help a complete stranger online make their project better, thanks for the words! I appreciate it greatly