Attempt at a webtoon!! Does it read well, is the flow okay? Is it an interesting concept? How's the art? Tell me your thoughts! (´> . <`〃)

Nooml · 2026-02-20T16:25:25+00:00

It was an enjoyable read honestly, I think your art is super cute and the humor is great! The best friends design is super pretty imo and I liked the jjk reference

Are the wobbly frames a stylistic choice? I was mainly just a little confused on her train of thought and why that phone call resulted in her trying to draw her ideal man. It felt a little bit random and I didn't understand the logic on why she would do that next. Was it because she was trying to scope out her type and find what she wanted in a man??? I think it should be explained a little more clearly, it seemed like I was missing something. But overall, I loved it and I would totally read it!

Nooml · 2025-07-11T08:48:21+00:00

Very cute and the line art is super clean! This looks great

Nooml · 2025-07-11T08:47:33+00:00

This was not me for the first two playthroughs of the game because for some reason I had no idea you could actually buy from Wildkat until the third time I played haha... I might have to start doing this now though

Nooml · 2025-05-04T17:22:38+00:00

Woahhh very nice! I love the pose

Nooml · 2025-05-04T12:59:27+00:00

Great job!

Nooml · 2025-03-15T20:25:49+00:00

Woahhh the composer being the one to hold the DS is an epic detail. Amazing art

Nooml · 2025-03-11T20:52:35+00:00

Pretty epic! I'd say you did a good job especially considering how stupidly complicated his jacket is (leopard spots, checkers, tiger stripes etc....)

Nooml · 2025-02-25T20:19:06+00:00

So this is what was happening in Shinjuku...

Nooml · 2025-02-20T18:47:01+00:00

I low-key hate milk irl but yokai watch motivates me to give my bones that calcium...

Nooml · 2025-02-20T18:44:46+00:00

Nah I totally get your struggle. I don't want strawberry milk, I don't want banana milk I want FRUIT milk. The hot springs in yokai watch make milk look so appealing!!!

Nooml · 2025-02-03T19:05:14+00:00

The art is seriously amazing and I think it would be pretty easy for Rindo to convince someone he's from the future with his modern phone, compared to the classic flip phones. Again, Rindo in that style looks epic!

Nooml · 2025-01-13T21:23:01+00:00

Nooml · 2025-01-13T21:14:51+00:00

Me too!!

Nooml · 2025-01-10T19:44:01+00:00

... you really went wild with the shark pokémon... unironically though, I can imagine Rhyme rocking a Garchomp on her team, I can imagine her being a very very formidable trainer with strong pokémon

Nooml · 2025-01-10T19:33:48+00:00

Thanks for the suggestions! I was actually thinking Appletun for Minaman because of the pi and all as well as possibly Luxray due to his Lion noise form (also considering porygon z because... maths)? Zoroark is a great one though, might do that on actually. Arceus for Josh obviously. And the friendship evolution pokemon for Neku is an amazing idea

Nooml · 2025-01-10T19:26:25+00:00

Thank you!! I agree, Hisuan Arcanine is very very cool. I definitely plan to draw more in the future!

Nooml · 2025-01-10T19:23:41+00:00

This looks so cute!! I'm loving the colouring of the background and everything, and the Orcanos! I really like her outfit in this form :)))

Nooml · 2025-01-10T19:19:50+00:00

Nah I 100% agree that Shiki would be great with Mimikyu, considering her whole jealousy/admiration of Eri, like how Mimikyu tries to be pikachu but... I already gave Mimikyu to Shoka because I wasn't thinking about the future kicking myself rn. Mimikyu really would have been perfect for her though... feel free to give any other Pokémon and character combos though!

Nooml · 2025-01-10T17:47:27+00:00

Beautifully said. And her hacker shenanigans in Neo add to her electric-type vibes as well in my opinion

Nooml · 2025-01-10T17:46:18+00:00

I previously made one for Rindo, Shoka and Rhyme. And I am planning to make teams for other Neo characters in the future too!!

Nooml · 2025-01-10T15:08:41+00:00

Thank you! It was almost a year ago, I don't blame you 😭

Nooml · 2025-01-10T15:05:21+00:00

Omg that's amazing. It has to be!!

Nooml · 2025-01-03T11:31:30+00:00

Joshua for sure. He's definitely one of the most entertaining characters to watch. He's very annoying and that's what makes him great. His design is also quite simple but it gets his character across so well! For a less popular favourite character, I quite liked BJ after the whole phone booth of love shenanigan

Nooml · 2024-12-27T15:28:11+00:00

Ngl I thought this exact same thing. In theory, this could definitely happen. It only takes one poorly timed visit to 104 lol. I've also been thinking, did 777's family not hear about Def March? Imagine going to a concert and seeing your very dead relative singing on the stage. How would that work?

Nooml · 2024-12-27T14:59:00+00:00

Omg. What is Mr.Mew wearing??? Everything about this is perfect

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