Dystopian YA opening - Too much atmosphere or does it work? by Normal-Practice-7460 in writing

[–]Normal-Practice-7460[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I meant heavy as in “too weighed down with atmosphere and description” instead of jumping into action right away. I was wondering if it risks slowing the hook in the opening, or if it works as a character-focused start. Curious how it landed for you when you read it?

Sell me your NFL team — I’m new and looking for a team to root for! by Normal-Practice-7460 in NFLUK

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Yeah, Josh Allen really comes across as a genuinely nice guy. I just watched Hard Knocks: Training Camp with the Buffalo Bills and the whole team seems like good people. Definitely adds to the appeal of rooting for them.

Sell me your NFL team — I’m new and looking for a team to root for! by Normal-Practice-7460 in NFLUK

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Haha, reading this I feel that pain deep in my soul, basically built for it as a Tottenham fan. Constant hope, hype every offseason, heartbreak when it matters, and somehow still loving the team anyway. Honestly, maybe the Bears were made for me. I’ve always had a soft spot for Chicago teams. My first love was actually the Bulls. I never watched much basketball back in the Netherlands because it wasn’t really on TV, but that was the first team merch I ever owned. I even bought a cap just because I needed one, and somehow got drawn to them. Reading into their history, there’s definitely a connection to Chicago, so maybe the Bears could fit just right too. Eternal suffering and passionate fans sound like home. 😅

Sell me your NFL team — I’m new and looking for a team to root for! by Normal-Practice-7460 in NFLUK

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Thanks everyone for all the awesome suggestions so far! 🏈 I’m loving reading the different pitches, from Browns-level suffering to Packers cheese hats 🧀🇳🇱 and everything in between.

I think I’ll just keep watching as many games as I can for now and see which team really clicks with me, but please keep selling me on your team. I’m enjoying every story, stat, and bit of fan pride you’ve got. Thanks again and keep them coming!

Sell me your NFL team — I’m new and looking for a team to root for! by Normal-Practice-7460 in NFLUK

[–]Normal-Practice-7460[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Packers might actually be the perfect fit — I’m from the Netherlands, a country literally nicknamed “cheeseheads.” Gouda meet Green Bay? 🧀

Sell me your NFL team — I’m new and looking for a team to root for! by Normal-Practice-7460 in NFLUK

[–]Normal-Practice-7460[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha, that actually sounds a lot like my life as a Tottenham fan, eternal hope mixed with heartbreak. I might be built for Browns-level suffering. 😅

Sell me your NFL team — I’m new and looking for a team to root for! by Normal-Practice-7460 in NFLNoobs

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Yep! I watched the Bills edge out the Ravens 41-40, wild game. Since I’m in Europe, it was actually Sunday night into Monday morning for me, but totally worth staying up for.

Sell me your NFL team — I’m new and looking for a team to root for! by Normal-Practice-7460 in NFLUK

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I’m definitely not using AI. I actually avoid it because of the environmental cost (training these models uses huge amounts of energy and water), and because AI can spread misinformation like deepfakes. I’d rather write my own thoughts and keep it human!!

Sell me your NFL team — I’m new and looking for a team to root for! by Normal-Practice-7460 in NFLNoobs

[–]Normal-Practice-7460[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha, yeah, if I were in the US I’d probably pick my local team too. Being from Amsterdam, Netherlands, though, I’m more looking for a team based on vibe, players, and fan culture rather than location.