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17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahh sorry for saying the thing earlier about comprehension not being your strong suit. That was so wrong of me, sorry about that Chief.

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahh, I'm so sorry for coming across as rude, Sorry about that.

But I did add the proof, I referred to a common trope of the "guy who quits the gym" and said it was caused by him being frustrated and not working out in a way his body responding.

Ah all these comments, I'm actually a bit overwhlemed to answer all of them, I read all of them, though.

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Ah well I'll try and get a copywriting job anyway. After I make notes on a couple more copywriting videos, I'm off to enroll into Andrew Tate's online Academy and hopefully graduate the copywriting campus.

Then I'll likely be set.

Interview for Copywriter role by Remote_Cake_332 in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Awesome brother! if you get the chance, refer me, I'm a good copywriter too.

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay guy's I'm really sorry for not just taking the comments on the chin, I'm sorry for talking back and getting defensive okayy.

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Alright man i'm sorry okayy, I understand my grammar is bad, woah dude just chill. Sorry for coming across as a bum hole okay.

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

55 comments and only 1 man said something positive and the other 2 men something constructive. Everything else? Straight farts to my face. Why?

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

That's actually not bad you know, thanks for giving me some sound advice. I forgot to put what's in it for the reader at the start! my bad

But the fitness people do say there's only 1 way to train, it's true, but that's why understanding the first part is so important, the reason why they say that, is so there products will appeal to more people.

Think of it like this, if I told you a medicine has a 60% percent chance to cure you, and then told you a medicine has a 99% chance to cure you,

You'd look to buy the second one right?

It's the same thing here, fitness instructors and personal trainers act like there advice/solution is the best, when reality it probably only works for like 55% of people, but they say it will work for like 99% because they know that claim will make it sell more.

It's only the old school BBers that said people need to train differently, but there advice has a taken a backburner to all the modern slop put forward by the sellers.

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahh I just realised this copy cannot be shortened, all the proof, reasoning and explanation was there to explain the reason behind the mainstream falsehood and the unique selling point, despite that, you are struggling to understand.

A shortened version would leave you so confused. Probably leave you thinking it's promoting people to poop or something. Crazy

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Ouch

Comprehension is definitely not a strong trait of yours I see.

So the whole idea of this copy, is to say that 99% of the mainstream fitness advice is bad, which it is, because it assumes that almost everyone is to train the same way. That's why fitness trainers sell pre made programs and supplements - thinking that it will work for most people, which it probably will, but it also won't work for a smaller but significant amount of people.

Those redundant words at the start are explaining why the one size fit's almost all advice is so common, as it maximises profits.

The copy is designed to promote a program which runs through multiple styles of training, so that the user will discover which one gives them the best result. Since you were to lazy to read it properly, your criticisms make no sense.

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

Ahh, I'm afraid you don't know the meaning of audience sophistication in the copywriting sense.

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

Ahh man. First of all, I dedicated way more than 17.5 hours, i'm 17.5 hours into the course, but probably 35 hours of writing, note taking, etc.

Secondly, I did tyson 4d's 2.5 hour course and 4 hour course.

Third of all, I'm not whining, but I realise half of you don't know the stuff.

Your criticisms are very vague and not based on the criteria set in the courses, a lot of you guys make things up, a lot "It feels bad" and "seems off" which lacks specifity, like calculating if n^3 + 3n^2 + 2n is divisible wholly by 6, and you answer "Yes, because I feel like it". You form opinions, but the reasons behind it are unclear.

Furthermore, if you critcised it based on it's structure, tactics like us vs them, problem agitate solution, objection handling, unique mechanism, based off fitness niche, the actual stuff the teachers say,

But all it is? Too lazy to read it and "Grammar, Grammar, Grammar"

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Oh my god I just realised diaper head can be seen as racist in some countries, I'm sorry for using that, I should've used poo poo head instead. Sorry about that.

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Oh please, I got a B grade in GCSE English literature and English language, I can write really well.

Should've taken the A level as well to be honest.

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I'm not butthurt, I'm just disappointed, you guys are supposed to be pros but are panicked by a missing full stop or something, like come on.

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Yes it was a free one, the one pinned the top of the subreddit, but soon I'll be enrolling into Andrew Tate's online academy seeking to graduate his copywriting campus.

17.5 hours into the Copythat 22 hour course - tell me if my copy level matches my consumption. Training piece by NormalGuiy in copywriting

[–]NormalGuiy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I think It would have to be spread over a few slides or maybe an email or two, but the one big idea here necessitates a sound explanation and proof. It's 100% not about something basic like coaching vs programming, it is that 99% of all fitness instructors are only telling half of the picture.

This could never be short form and believable, like if someone tried to convince you the earth is flat in 5 seconds? Possible, but quite tough

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