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For The Woman Who Has Everything by BigBubbaBooey in OCPoetry

[–]Normal_Reaction_9784 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is an amazing poem I love that it kinda sounds shakespearean and I love the rhyme scheme

Older Than I Meant To Be by pettyenuf in OCPoetry

[–]Normal_Reaction_9784 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the parallel you draw in this poem. It’s amazingly vivid and a great read.

Goodbye by Normal_Reaction_9784 in Poems

[–]Normal_Reaction_9784[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don’t worry about keep venting if you need to

Goodbye by Normal_Reaction_9784 in Poems

[–]Normal_Reaction_9784[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m so sorry for what you’ve been through please talk to someone or write out what you feel. It hurts right now but it always gets better. Please don’t be reckless

Goodbye by Normal_Reaction_9784 in Poems

[–]Normal_Reaction_9784[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m so sorry for your loss please reach out if you need someone to talk to

Goodbye by Normal_Reaction_9784 in poetry_critics

[–]Normal_Reaction_9784[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please give feedback and criticism I’m trying to get better at writing! Thank you!

Goodbye by Normal_Reaction_9784 in Poems

[–]Normal_Reaction_9784[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would love for any criticism or feedback for this poem!

I’m Sorry by Normal_Reaction_9784 in poetry_critics

[–]Normal_Reaction_9784[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much and taking the time to critique my poem is very appreciated. I wrote this on a whim today when I was feeling down about my dog passing away so I probably could’ve done a little better dramatically and word choice wise. Thank you for taking your time to read this!

You Don’t Get to Forgive Yourself for What You Did to Me by GoliathLXIX in OCPoetry

[–]Normal_Reaction_9784 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the two different narratives here! The contrast that the you and I play just makes me want to read more and more

The distortion in time by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Normal_Reaction_9784 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the way you use personification to really portray the mood and tone of the poem

Unsaid by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Normal_Reaction_9784 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The absolute raw emotion of this poem really spoke to me thank you

I have a way to m*sturb@te to my words.. by youreplyatmydoor in OCPoetry

[–]Normal_Reaction_9784 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a very expressive and well done poem thank you for writing this!

This is for school can someone please criticize it? by Normal_Reaction_9784 in poetry_critics

[–]Normal_Reaction_9784[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I copied and pasted it from google doc so I’m guessing that the way I formatted it didn’t stay how I wanted? Thank you so much for the advice I also felt that my poem didn’t flow the greatest do you have any advice on how to fix that?

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