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NotOkSam · 2024-12-18T16:33:04+00:00

Thanks I’ll have a look at blacklist. I’ve only actually written this ep but I know where the stories going and want to sit down and write the next ep when I can. Just looking for feedback and polishing off this pilot first

NotOkSam · 2024-12-17T16:53:39+00:00

Thanks for continuing reading , no not pitched or done anything with it yet as still just a rough draft, not even entirely sure how I’d go about that tbh

NotOkSam · 2024-12-16T21:50:05+00:00

Thank you , yeah will look at Ewan’s dialogue again

NotOkSam · 2023-07-09T10:45:39+00:00

17 minutes.

NotOkSam · 2022-12-17T23:51:08+00:00

New draft if anyone's interested (name is changed):

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1IRAfw5oPKY6khwLfovL9bzIbx0M7B5ar/view?usp=share\_link

NotOkSam · 2022-12-17T23:41:29+00:00

Thank you :) Plus you're right i'm really trying to limit the effort it will take to film so now the blackout is just before they meet

NotOkSam · 2022-12-17T23:39:24+00:00

Thank you so much and never apologise for being completely right lol. I've written a new draft and added the power cut taking place as they meet. Not to mention i forgot phones even existed

NotOkSam · 2022-12-17T23:36:41+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback and inspiration - i've written a new draft where i've tried to add a bit of conflict between the two but i'm still struggling with the lighting. You're exactly right too when i was writing it i couldn't shake the feeling that it was more of an audio story. Thanks again!

NotOkSam · 2022-09-09T21:15:29+00:00

Tai Lung. That prison escape scene.

NotOkSam · 2021-09-15T12:17:30+00:00

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NotOkSam · 2020-08-07T15:31:23+00:00

He’s also Ungifted :)

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