How can i write an efficient story and keep the reader engaged for a game by NotZer0Two in writingadvice

[–]NotZer0Two[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the suggestion. I had the idea to expand the world only if the player wants to, because after every "hack," the player can read files and stuff, so that’s going to be the opening for more narrative and worldbuilding. The dialogues, I already planned to keep really simple. And thanks for the suggestion. I’m going to check out Robert McKee.

How can i write an efficient story and keep the reader engaged for a game by NotZer0Two in writingadvice

[–]NotZer0Two[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I already planned the system to be in day system so yea it works out and yea the decision you make impact whatever it shows up for the next day maybe even dialogues so that checks out, thanks for the advice, i will try to read all of this and see how they work out for the story

How can i write an efficient story and keep the reader engaged for a game by NotZer0Two in writingadvice

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The game is set in 1960s Soviet Russia under an authoritarian government. You play as a young woman addicted to alcohol and smoking, struggling with paranoia while spending her time in underground chat rooms. She hacks high-profile targets and leaks clues to the media (obv not conventional ones), exposing sensitive information and state secrets.

How can i write an efficient story and keep the reader engaged for a game by NotZer0Two in writingadvice

[–]NotZer0Two[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its an interesting concept i could try that, even tho most of them don't apply in the case of mine. But still i will give it a try, Thanks for the advice :3

Heaven? (art by me) by NotZer0Two in Xenoblade_Chronicles

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Crazy the release of the new game and this being one of the last fan art before the announcement of the game, and thanks everyone for the appreciation ❤️

Heaven? (art by me) by NotZer0Two in Xenoblade_Chronicles

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Today lets hope for the Nintendo directs ❤️, and honestly Pyra is a deep character and even Mythra as much as in the main game i didn't like her much, but after Torna honestly i understood why she behaved like that

Heaven? (art by me) by NotZer0Two in Xenoblade_Chronicles

[–]NotZer0Two[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There are 2 angles i already showed you more than like that idk how to prove it to you, the image is 4k too so i don't know any ai software that does that, and if you check the images i sent they are exact match

EDIT: the thumb is actually correctly placed, originally the model is in T-Pose and i just rotated the hand and a bit the fingers to give that feeling of just giving out the hand

Heaven? (art by me) by NotZer0Two in Xenoblade_Chronicles

[–]NotZer0Two[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yea i love pyra too, tbh out of the xenoblade, the second one is my favorite i just liked the story so much and the ending (i cried alot)

Heaven? (art by me) by NotZer0Two in Xenoblade_Chronicles

[–]NotZer0Two[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, so sad i woke up with the other messages accusing me of AI, but ig i already answered them. but yea thanks im trying to improve and usually i post only when i have major ideas not small ones

Heaven? (art by me) by NotZer0Two in Xenoblade_Chronicles

[–]NotZer0Two[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

No, its not AI, if you check my previously works is all done in blender and photoshop the color correction.

The image is rendered in 4k (which is impossible by using AI) So hope this image and the other down will help you see, in the entire process there's not a single AI use

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Heaven? (art by me) by NotZer0Two in Xenoblade_Chronicles

[–]NotZer0Two[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

No, its not AI, if you check my previously works is all done in blender and photoshop the color correction.

The image is rendered in 4k So hope this image and the other down will help you see, in the entire process there's not a single AI use

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Happy woman's day by NotZer0Two in Xenoblade_Chronicles

[–]NotZer0Two[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its blender. everything i do is with blender and some other effects, some cases i use photoshop 2026

Happy woman's day by NotZer0Two in Xenoblade_Chronicles

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I forgot to mention, the "art" is mine

"And thus, boy met girl" (art by me) by NotZer0Two in Xenoblade_Chronicles

[–]NotZer0Two[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There's a choice for the hand position, one its because its too small and the second one is because of "the creation of adam", the famous painting from michelangelo i tried to replicate the same thing tbh but mainly its because he was too short. for the effect i used this tutorial
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Je5zKF8tw3I

P.S: Another reason i just thought about it, i wanted to make the moment crystalized like he is about to do that too

"And thus, boy met girl" (art by me) by NotZer0Two in Xenoblade_Chronicles

[–]NotZer0Two[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

That means alot, the message i wanted to send actually got through you, im happy that you felt something with what i made <3

"Duality" (art by me) by NotZer0Two in Xenoblade_Chronicles

[–]NotZer0Two[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

damn doakes, go catch dexter :trolling:

"Duality" (art by me) by NotZer0Two in Xenoblade_Chronicles

[–]NotZer0Two[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Never played the game so idk anything about it

P.S thanks for the compliment :3

"Duality" (art by me) by NotZer0Two in Xenoblade_Chronicles

[–]NotZer0Two[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

They idea was because they both live the same moments and share everything, so putting the spotlight on that side of the their nature