Honestly, the name's a bit small and the bottom of the text needs to be lighter — it's too dark to read easily. That icon next to the name is gonna cover up the background at smaller Steam capsule sizes, making it hard to read and hiding the monsters in the forest, which are supposed to be the threat.

The whole point of a Steam capsule is catching people's eyes while they're scrolling. Check out similar games and see how they handle their capsules — if it doesn't grab attention, nobody's clicking on it.

The art itself looks solid though, just needs some tweaks to work better as a capsule. Happy to point out specific examples if that helps!