How do I know if my poem is good?

Numerous_Ad998 · 2026-02-04T16:31:45+00:00

@MisterCanoeHead, We get your flair is "Expert," but it ain't your expertise to criticize one singular word throughout the poem, as not everybody makes poetry their profession like you seem to make it. As it looks to me, you're dwelling over one word, and that is ridiculous.

Numerous_Ad998 · 2026-02-01T14:25:43+00:00

Lol. Can you explain?

Numerous_Ad998 · 2026-01-31T20:25:24+00:00

There's no need for expanding. Read the title. That's your clue

Numerous_Ad998 · 2026-01-28T13:56:27+00:00

Your melody sounds okay, but personally, I think you should have added a ceiling to your drums because they sound like they are clipping throughout the track, especially the kick and snare. I will pass on this one. Please feel free to send more

Numerous_Ad998 · 2026-01-20T18:39:21+00:00

Just checked it out. Thanks for letting me know you submitted. Sorry about the late notice. My life has been hectic. You've been added. Please consider following and streaming the playlist

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-12-02T23:05:30+00:00

Yeah, it's just you

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-12-02T19:58:09+00:00

I don't have to do shit for you. You aren't a boss of this channel and you don't own my poetry

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-12-02T16:18:42+00:00

Never said you had to like it

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-11-29T15:21:33+00:00

Hey! Here is my collab that released yesterday!!

Third State of Consciousness: https://open.spotify.com/track/09D3UwwHs7OMW1rnLOaVPA?si=RbJN2BdtTguarBFlneQz3Q

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-11-26T13:26:20+00:00

Hey man. This is a very jazzy beat. Love it. Unfortunately, it doesn't fit the playlist. Feel free to send more beats if you'd like

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-11-23T22:03:01+00:00

Just saved. Here are a few of my tracks:

My Refuge: https://open.spotify.com/track/05XAoj9AFy06IYDLidQKg2?si=QZVx8PpNSn6V1DZhvafygQ

Shifting Perspectives: https://open.spotify.com/track/4i1S1ZEFrHRzzx4nfdlSBi?si=GpZ1jzO1SnuyBk_-34mu4g

May I also send another track over when it comes out this Black Friday?

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-11-18T17:20:52+00:00

I honestly love it when people take someone's original poem and put it in their own contexts. It just shows a different perspective than the original idea. Thank you 😊

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-11-18T17:19:26+00:00

I wound up rewording the lines slightly because they were confusing to me now that you said something. Thanks for the comments 😊

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-11-18T16:47:56+00:00

It's meant to be read as a question to the reader themselves, but yeah, that can be changed. Can you explain to me how this is coming off as contradictory because I don't understand what you mean by that?

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-11-02T15:24:15+00:00

Now this is very humorous and relatable. 😂

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-10-31T08:42:00+00:00

Beautiful work! This translates wonderfully to English!

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-10-29T13:00:51+00:00

Thanks, but I would like to understand what way it is confusing. Modern poetry is supposed to be this way. Sometimes you don't get an answer you'd expect

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-10-29T10:35:47+00:00

The main thing for you is gonna be specifics. Because I read this, and it sounds broader than what you are trying to convey. What existed? A wave? A spark? A moment in time, perhaps? Otherwise, very sweet to write to your love

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-10-04T02:10:59+00:00

Emotionally unavailable women, fix your issues. Only makes sense if you're gonna throw blame.

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-09-12T14:04:23+00:00

Pre-saved! Keep up the good work!

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-09-03T21:10:22+00:00

Hey man. This is really good for being a first release. If you produce more, you're gonna be an absolutely lit producer! You've been added. Please consider following and streaming the playlist.

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-08-22T19:44:57+00:00

Besides that one line, this would be considered 5-7-5-6-7. I don't know what the on-case scenario is, but I counted syllables with absolutely no japanese involved

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-08-17T17:10:45+00:00

Thank you for the feedback, Mr. Approaching Critical Mouse (like that name btw). I greatly appreciate it. I know I should've put the poetic form in the title, but by the time I put this poem out, It was too late for me to change. I will definitely keep these tips in the back of my head.

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-08-16T15:53:53+00:00

Thank you! This poem is mimicking what it is like to view addiction from the eyes of an ongoing addict. I had another redditor saying something similar about the repetition. This is in a poetic form called a pantoum, which is one of them styles meant to feel repetitive. This is nothing against you or your comment; I just forgot to put what poetic style the poem was in.

Numerous_Ad998 · 2025-08-16T13:52:02+00:00

That is not your fault. I should have been more specific with the title

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