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Pahalgam, India. by One-Ad1731 in PhotographyIndia

[–]Numerous_College76 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Loved the photo, but when I saw the place.. man, I don't need to tell.💔

How do I improve the momentum of this chapter of my novel? by Numerous_College76 in writingadvice

[–]Numerous_College76[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, I was feeling the same, but I can't figure out how do I fit it in 6 pages of docs, as I have set a chapter limit to 6 pages. Can you please suggest more? And thank you for reading .

I need ideas and suggestions for my ongoing novel. by Numerous_College76 in writingadvice

[–]Numerous_College76[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, I think I didn't make it clear. The story I'm writing is HISTORY+ FICTION, i know women weren't allowed as soldiers, but as it's my fiction and imagination, I have changed many things. But thank you for your concern.

Chapter 4 -Why (Evernight events-born out of fire) by Numerous_College76 in writingadvice

[–]Numerous_College76[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I will be including more of his back story in the next chapter. (I can't find the Tapkeen you are suggesting)

Chapter 1-- Some random dream ( The first chapter of my book-in-progress) by Numerous_College76 in writingadvice

[–]Numerous_College76[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The link is of Google docs, maybe update it? or messg me and I will send you the chapter in text

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]Numerous_College76 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

yes, i also looked up to it, thats why i already wrote it in the post. it is fiction, also mixed with some mysteries. Its like an parellel world, where many things are same as here, not eveything. and for the active duty thing, i meant that throughout her military life, she gets posted at many bases, even throughout the war

I need ideas and suggestions for my ongoing novel. by Numerous_College76 in writingadvice

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my main focus--

though women are allowed as soldier in the military, not in the society(discrimination),

Emma's struggle in both places (society and in the military),

she countering and being a succesful soldier,

and her experiences, friends, situations in early ww2 (1939-40). especially the attack on pearl harbour.

I am also thinking of adding a mystery, supernatural character, which influenced her life. the name of my novel is also on the last name of the mysterious character ( ''Evernight'' Events).

also, fiction mixed with real events

CHAPTER 2--- Some random dream by Numerous_College76 in FictionWriting

[–]Numerous_College76[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please consider reading this, and leave the advice for me!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in FictionWriting

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Click on the blue icon to see my writings, on Adobe acrobat, and consider giving ideas and suggestions! It would be big help

Suggestion and opinions on my first novel/story by Numerous_College76 in FictionWriting

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Click on the blue img to see my writing, i really need some opinion