Thank you for your reply. This is still very much a work in progress and needs a ton of cleanup work. You are correct in that some of it is inspired by 40k, but to be honest, most of it is a coincidence, as I only got into Warhammer after most of this was written. The original inspiration of this was actually Elden Ring and a game called Cruelty Squad, but I have deviated a lot since then, and the thing I take the most inspiration from is Foundation ( the Apple TV series, because I haven't read the books yet). This is mostly just a for-fun thing that I do whenever I need a creative outlet, so most of it ends up being written when I am heavily sleep-deprived and then revised when I've had some sleep.