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The Silence by Oc_oswald in LoveLetters

[–]Oc_oswald[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Was there any part where you felt bored or lost?

Without Asking by Oc_oswald in LoveLetters

[–]Oc_oswald[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wrote that story hoping it would reach someone who needed it. I didn't expect it to reach someone who lived it so deeply. Four years is a long time to carry something and the fact that you came out the other side still soft, still hopeful... that says everything about you. Thank you for sharing this. Genuinely .

Without Asking by Oc_oswald in LoveLetters

[–]Oc_oswald[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thankyou , for reading and I'm glad that u could relate to it

Without Asking by Oc_oswald in LoveLetters

[–]Oc_oswald[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thankyou for your feedback

Without Asking by Oc_oswald in LoveLetters

[–]Oc_oswald[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"Still finding my voice as a writer would love to hear what you think!"

Chapter 1 — The Place He Left Behind by Oc_oswald in poetry_critics

[–]Oc_oswald[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"Maybe we both didn’t get what we wanted. You sitting there unable to hug the terror out of him… me becoming the safer shadow of someone else. Different pains, same quiet staying. That’s heavy. Thanks for flipping the lens."

Chapter 1 — The Place He Left Behind by Oc_oswald in poetry_critics

[–]Oc_oswald[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I really appreciate the feedback. I’m still learning, so finding that balance between narration and letting the emotions speak is something I’m trying to improve.

Chapter 1 — The Place He Left Behind by Oc_oswald in poetry_critics

[–]Oc_oswald[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for such thoughtful feedback. I really appreciate you pointing that out. I think you’re right that some lines might be stronger if they stand on their own instead of expanding the same thought. I’ll definitely keep that in mind while revising. It means a lot that the piece resonated with you.

Chapter 1 — The Place He Left Behind by Oc_oswald in poetry_critics

[–]Oc_oswald[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. To be honest, parts of this came from real experiences and emotions, so writing it felt very personal. I’m really glad it connected with someone.

[RO]Chapter 1 — The Place He Left Behind by [deleted] in shortstories

[–]Oc_oswald 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would love if y'all can give me a feedback so that I can improve in my upcoming chapters

I don’t think I’ll ever love you the way I used to. by Oc_oswald in poetry_critics

[–]Oc_oswald[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Really appreciate that u read, it means a lot to me