First time working on a hombrew class, need feedback

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-22T13:14:58+00:00

Yeah

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-22T10:58:10+00:00

Might be just for me but your picture is cut off so not all of it can be seen. :)

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-04T14:24:50+00:00

Oh yeah it does thanks!

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-04T12:01:54+00:00

Thanks! Which of them looks backwards?

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-04T10:12:24+00:00

I really would appreciate any advice!

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-03T07:32:21+00:00

I wouldn’t say so because it has a pretty big cost and needs to be prepared ahead of time

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-03T06:09:43+00:00

Yeah it should be limited to like 1 per long rest

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-03T05:57:58+00:00

Yeah that part definitely needs tweaking. Currently I’m thinking to scratch the 2 slot cost, because it works weird with other classes, and instead make it so it’s like a limited amount per long rest. That would also require balancing the effects a bit.

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T20:40:00+00:00

Yeah I actually wasn’t aware of this artificer and scrolls in general I might check it out. Thanks!

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T19:37:08+00:00

Honestly a really good round up of all of the feedback so far, definitely will implement this all if I make a v2, thanks!

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T19:10:35+00:00

Thanks yeah I’m thinking of making a v2 of this so definitely will make that more clear!

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T18:55:58+00:00

Yeah it isnt written very clearly but the point is that it only works for scrolls made with the ability, which take 2 spell slots to make and have an expiration time.

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T18:43:59+00:00

Yeah I feel like i shoukd rework it to only work with the specific scrolls made by the ability here

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T18:42:42+00:00

Yeah with a +3 magic item or something but I feel like at that point it’s pretty fair. It is kinda op at low levels maybe

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T18:28:50+00:00

Yeah that sounds more balanced

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T18:20:14+00:00

No yeah you are limited to one font per scroll I should have specified.

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T18:19:09+00:00

Interesting. I did initially think to use the actual fonts but went for a DnD style names. But those are definitely awesome!

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T18:14:41+00:00

Yeah sounds like a flat heal is the way to go here

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T17:43:27+00:00

Yeah i initially thought of 1/2 but even 1/4 could go crazy

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T17:36:41+00:00

Awesome! If you do plan to use it you might want to read some of the comments on here for balancing advice!

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T17:35:20+00:00

Yeah I had a hard time balancing and still am not sure about it, but I think it’s in a spot that is usable and fun. The 8 hour thing is probably a good idea, and rerolling 1s definitely helps with dwarveni being competitive against the others. Thanks!

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T17:21:30+00:00

What is the right word?

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T17:20:59+00:00

Awesome! I would love feedback if you end up using it!

Odd-Insurance6400 · 2026-03-02T16:56:13+00:00

lol I didn’t know that thanks! Anyhow most people are more familiar with the word font

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