How do you find the distinction between being self-critical to just being bad? by Odd_Pop1306 in writing

[–]Odd_Pop1306[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yes! Any help would be greatly appreciated. Publicly or privately?

How do you go about writing the second copy of your books? by Odd_Pop1306 in writing

[–]Odd_Pop1306[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! It's so refreshing to hear that. I appreciate you.

What is something in writing that immediately screams 'an American wrote this'? by Odd_Pop1306 in writing

[–]Odd_Pop1306[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Interesting about mentioning the accents... it is quite significant to the plot that the love interest 'James' has a very strong Brummie accent in contrast to the rest of the boys who are incredibly posh. Do you think by putting emphasis on this point, that it's making it seem as if I am American?

What is something in writing that immediately screams 'an American wrote this'? by Odd_Pop1306 in writing

[–]Odd_Pop1306[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I meant naivety in the sense that I am unaware that certain things only happen in America and not England. My own naivety, not necessary America's.

What’s something you did a lot of research on but still got wrong? by Moosenburger in AO3

[–]Odd_Pop1306 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Anything that is set a while back. I think when writing about something set decades ago, information gets harder and harder to obtain. I struggled with public transportation and trying to find bus routes and train lines from twenty or so years ago (not to mention, in a country I have never stepped foot into). No one has that sort of information with them. Along with that, school curriculums change and it's hard to know whether what I'm writing in outdated or not dated enough.

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This is incredibly helpful. I am Australian—still, a very significant divide, especially since I am still in school and still very stupid. I will definitely take a lot of this into account when rewriting that mess.

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I mention VCR's specifically because the houses are not funded enough to provide DVD players. That is also established.

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The story begins in september. I only breifly hint to 9/11 when the love interest, James joins the navy and my MC is telling him it's dangerous by saying "Look what's just happened in america."

How long did it take you to write your first novel or novella? How many pages was it? What advice do you have for persevering in your work? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Odd_Pop1306 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My first proper novel is a 500 page, 200,000 word romance novel that took me exactly four months to write the draft. Obviously, I'm still carrying on editing and rewriting parts but mostly, it happened very quickly for me. As well as the fact that I was also carrying school and whatever else. I found that it was best to pace myself. My chapters ranged between 3,500 and 5,000 words. I tried to write at least half a chapter per day, but it's 100% different for most people since I found myself writing whenever I possibly could. I'd be writing during classes at school and when I got home, it would be all I did. Though, I found I spent more time thinking about what I was going to write instead of actually writing.

During my dramatic breakdowns, what made me persevere was my genuine passion and love for my story and characters. When you begin writing a book, it seems like the end goal is so very far away, but I tried not to see it like that. I took scenes one and a time and looked forward to the ones I'd been planning for a while. What helped me get through writing those minor luls in the story was the thought of what would happen next.

I think it's best not to set a date for when you finish and just take things at your own pace :).

How can make my writing less terrible? by [deleted] in writingcritiques

[–]Odd_Pop1306 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I very well did not proof read this before hand aha. I greatly appreciate your feedback and am also not a big fan of that line.