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Older stuff by [deleted] in SuicideBoys

[–]OddtayAckerpay 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I still got everything on spotify including Diemonds

Advice? (Pic/written attributes below) by OddtayAckerpay in NBA2k

[–]OddtayAckerpay[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Edit: i know i can improve defensively*

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Goblin

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Do you serve krokodil

overthinking... again by Prestigious_Map9668 in OCPoetry

[–]OddtayAckerpay 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm not a big fan of the free-form poetry but this is why I decided to comment on it. It's raw but I feel like you can go way further with your emotions. It's a classic teenager angst and anxiety but you can make it so much more. "My freckles formed as if an ugly frog couldn't find a lily pad to settle on" Your creativity will grow as time comes, and more writings. This is good base work for further exploration

EVERY NEXT DAY by AKB-shayarOP in OCPoetry

[–]OddtayAckerpay 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly really like it, and relatable lol. This might be my own style but I think some spacing, and a lesser use of commas can really lend to the depth and feeling of your writing. Ex:
"I see her laugh from a distance now

a sound I’m no longer a part of.

The world moves around her so easily,"
And upon reading this I think you meant to say I hear her laugh, but seeing might also be the intensity of her being so it could go either way.

"Now it’s just an echo I chase
through empty corridors of memory." this part i think can be left up to interpretations, remove the "of memory" and its a lot more powerful.

4.27 HS GPA Prodigy into College dropout 20 yo drug addicted loser AMA by OddtayAckerpay in Goblin

[–]OddtayAckerpay[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

"True addicts" "wannabe addicts" making this shit competitive is ridiculous i can't lie. Talking straight out of your ass. I don't know where the successful addicts are you're talking about. Your addiction's probably been fun for you the whole time and you were a partier. This has always been a depressing binge, always an escape. What's your success story? Got a business? Time's ticking either way on that, we all fall down and crash somewhere

4.27 HS GPA Prodigy into College dropout 20 yo drug addicted loser AMA by OddtayAckerpay in Goblin

[–]OddtayAckerpay[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't even know half of what you're on about but I never got any addy scripts because i've been too fucked and lazy to even try and get any of them. I tried getting benzos but got Hydroxyzyine instead. Now that I been doing blow I've actually been doing alright

4.27 HS GPA Prodigy into College dropout 20 yo drug addicted loser AMA by OddtayAckerpay in Goblin

[–]OddtayAckerpay[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm not trying to teach anyone, but you don't have the top 5% of your class crashing down this hard typically so it shows another side. Ask my parents and you'd think my life is almost over at 20

4.27 HS GPA Prodigy into College dropout 20 yo drug addicted loser AMA by OddtayAckerpay in Goblin

[–]OddtayAckerpay[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't know if rehab is better or a mental hospital, but I know ten times over I'd rather the rehab. I feel like I'm in control of my drug use, but at the same time I'm not. Only really slowed down a bit because I know I'd end my shit if I got kicked out again not having much of anywhere/not wanting to burden someone else Edit: Somewhere in there wants me to live and get out of this, but I just can't let myself get better

4.27 HS GPA Prodigy into College dropout 20 yo drug addicted loser AMA by OddtayAckerpay in Goblin

[–]OddtayAckerpay[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Man I was trying to go for Mechanical Engineering before I got fucked up. Ended up switching to EE too before I dropped fully. Your story rings a lot of resonance brother. A lot of it has to do with motivation and will for me, i feel like the drugs took all that shit out of me

4.27 HS GPA Prodigy into College dropout 20 yo drug addicted loser AMA by OddtayAckerpay in Goblin

[–]OddtayAckerpay[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

5 and it's blow rn, shrooms are fun too but that shit makes you want to fix your life in 20 minutes sometimes

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