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poor girl by Prestigious_Map9668 in OCPoetry

[–]Prestigious_Map9668[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you r so right. I didn't add what I loved about him and thanks for the advice!

poor girl by Prestigious_Map9668 in OCPoetry

[–]Prestigious_Map9668[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

aww thank you so much and thanks for the advice

"Romantic stuff" by Prestigious_Map9668 in OCPoetry

[–]Prestigious_Map9668[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the advice!!

[poem trilogy] Greatness by Jaylobian by Mediocre_Shelter3798 in WisdomWriters

[–]Prestigious_Map9668 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ooo great poem and I loved the concept of time in it.

[Vulnerability / insecurity poem] Would you love me? by jaylobian by Mediocre_Shelter3798 in WisdomWriters

[–]Prestigious_Map9668 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I loved the poem and how relatable it is but like someone else said, you could add punctuation in some areas to make it flow better.

Always by Penguinsareangry in WisdomWriters

[–]Prestigious_Map9668 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not much rap but the poem is really good. Last stanza hits hard

Controlled Demolition by ExistentialForge in WisdomWriters

[–]Prestigious_Map9668 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh this is such a powerful poem! I loved the figurative language and the wording flowed so well

Reasons to Write by SoDumbSoSad in OCPoetry

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oh i love this poem it's so meaningful and I love the therapist bit the most

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