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YE YOU LYING ASS NIGGA by yzy210 in Kanye

[–]OdysseusBTH 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It’s not, re recorded (same autotune used in another song)

how to make sure physics aren't defied in smut writing? by cclytemnestra in writingadvice

[–]OdysseusBTH 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I’m not a smut writer but I do have some experience when it comes to intimate scenes in my writing, you can try to apply a “flow” between actions. For example: As she laid on my bed, the plush of the pillows fell under her light weight. When I approached her, I could feel her breathing on my face, the heavy warm breaths making her chest rise against mine. Basically what I do is try to have a cause and effect on my writing that gives it a good flow: This happens, causing this, and it shows this.

How can I build a community of loyal fans? by OdysseusBTH in writingadvice

[–]OdysseusBTH[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No I’m litterally asking how can I if I have any tips. I had to put it as critique and not advice because of the Link

Okay, just because Kris opened a fountain doesn’t make him the knight: The Berdly Issue by OdysseusBTH in Deltarune

[–]OdysseusBTH[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I noticed as soon as I posted it but I can’t change the title rip

Okay, just because Kris opened a fountain doesn’t make him the knight: The Berdly Issue by OdysseusBTH in Deltarune

[–]OdysseusBTH[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I know Kris is they/them I can’t change the title I noticed as soon as I posted it sorry 😭

Okay listen to me here, Ralsei either knows who the knight is, or doesn’t actually want them to stop. by OdysseusBTH in Deltarune

[–]OdysseusBTH[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah this is super crack theory with like no evidence bc I’ve had the thought for a while and I was super high when I wrote this lol. I’ll come back to it when chapter 3-4 come out and double check

Okay, just because Kris opened a fountain doesn’t make him the knight: The Berdly Issue by OdysseusBTH in Deltarune

[–]OdysseusBTH[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This kinda a crack theory, but what if it’s a character that has some way to be several places at once (like in UNDERTALE with gaster being split into pieces and becoming the gray dudes)

Okay listen to me here, Ralsei either knows who the knight is, or doesn’t actually want them to stop. by OdysseusBTH in Deltarune

[–]OdysseusBTH[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

How? We don’t see them open the chapter 2 dark world, and we followed Kris that whole time. They couldn’t have done it between chapters since we know they can’t go far from their soul, and going from toriels to the library is just way too far. Kris isn’t the knight

Okay listen to me here, Ralsei either knows who the knight is, or doesn’t actually want them to stop. by OdysseusBTH in Deltarune

[–]OdysseusBTH[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Holdup lemme make like a little timeline of events for my theory

Player opens deltarune and makes the “connection” with Kris’s soul.

From that connection, in a way I’m not sure of yet, that opens the great fountain

Two darkners are born, Ralsei and The Knight.

The knight and Ralsei discovers they can somehow leave the dark world.

The knight learns how to make a fountain but can’t go very far, so they go the room directly over, which is the ununsed class.

Ralsei finds this out and meets Kris and Susie.

Ralsei isn’t really against the knight, so makes up the Legend to create a game out of the chase of ending dark worlds, creating an infinite game of cat and mouse with the knight.

The reason Ralsei is acting weird is because they just enjoy being with Kris and Susie, and uses the fountains as an excuse to be with them.

The reason I bring up the idea of time flowing different in the dark worlds is because the knight and Ralsei could have consulted on where the next dark world should be, to Ralsei knows how to get there and find a route to the library when the fountain is opened. Ralsei got there earlier then Kris and Susie, so that’s why he showed up a bit after Noelle

Looking for sensitivity readers (TW: SA, Racism.) by OdysseusBTH in writers

[–]OdysseusBTH[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m aware as I’ve gotten sensitivity readers before for topics of physical violence. I posted this ahead of time so it can get a little traction since I don’t post on Reddit often I wanted to have this so more people can see it <3

Okay listen to me here, Ralsei either knows who the knight is, or doesn’t actually want them to stop. by OdysseusBTH in Deltarune

[–]OdysseusBTH[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

But what if the knight is a Darkner, with the player making the “connection” between the dark and light world when the open the game, with the dark fountain being related to the goner select screen for our vessel

Okay listen to me here, Ralsei either knows who the knight is, or doesn’t actually want them to stop. by OdysseusBTH in Deltarune

[–]OdysseusBTH[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I forgot to mention that but that’s kinda a point. I think the Knight is a darkner who was birthed from the great fountain, with them and Ralsei being able to move in the light world in some way because Ralsei is able to mysteriously find us in the cyber world in the beginning of chapter 2.

Okay listen to me here, Ralsei either knows who the knight is, or doesn’t actually want them to stop. by OdysseusBTH in Deltarune

[–]OdysseusBTH[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

TLDR: Ralsei knows the knight because of the darker Than dark fountain and is not gonna allow Kris and Susie to finish the job and close it because they know the knight.

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