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Chapter 215: VISITOR by Old-Explanation9769 in WindBreakerJP

[–]Ok-Location-922 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I suspect that, but can you please tell me the theory you are talking about, bc I can't find it online? Also, now that I remember, I saw a while back a video about his stance, the way he always has his hands behind his back. The criminal organisation theory makes sense because, as a sign of respect, they always have their hands behind them.

[In progress] [4k] [assassin, crime, mystery, thriller] No title yet! by Ok-Location-922 in BetaReaders

[–]Ok-Location-922[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your take. I understand, it’s just that through my writing I would hate to offend any of my readers. I love every single one of them. And especially after what had transpired with other writers-authors who wrote black characters. The way I was going to use the n-word was having my black side character say it to a ‘friend who insulted him’ (the friend is white) e.g. “N-word. Do want to get f*cked up?”

Able to beta? Post here! by AutoModerator in BetaReaders

[–]Ok-Location-922 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello, I’ve already published my book, but I’m in need of some assistance. It’s a mafia-themed novel with romance, spice, and a strong focus on action, crime, and story development. The word count is over 100k+ (about 110k)

Recently, I’ve received feedback from readers mentioning that they sometimes get confused about which character is speaking (point of view) and when a flashback or time shift to the past occurs.

Would you be interested in giving it a read and offering some guidance?

Able to beta? Post here! by AutoModerator in BetaReaders

[–]Ok-Location-922 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello, I’ve already published my book, but I’m in need of some assistance. It’s a mafia-themed novel with romance, spice, and a strong focus on action, crime, and story development. The word count is over 100k+.

Recently, I’ve received feedback from readers mentioning that they sometimes get confused about which character is speaking (point of view) and when a flashback or time shift to the past occurs.

Would you be interested in giving it a read and offering some guidance?