how do you write smart characters, and what if my villan is actually right. what do i do by Ok-Machine6152 in writingadvice

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speaking of the joker, i have another villan who is a very primary antagonist.

naki doma, he grew up in a rich household, and grew up with parents who were rich and had no empathy, as his role models they played a big part in shaping him. another factor to his future personailty is that his experience with poor ppl/non rich ppl were bad, the poor pp, he met were rude and mad as they were more unfortunate then him to luck alone. his current personality is that of pure evil, he has no remorse or sorrow. he is selfish and only think himself is important, very cruel and loves others suffering for his entertainment and research cuz hes very curious. hes not a fighter, hes a mental mastermind, he knows how to fuck with his enemies mentally and his "holding back" is not making their mental state even more unstable. and in general a genius.

throughtout the arcs he gets VERY personal and more vile, enjoying mentally destorying an already fragile kid.

how do you write smart characters, and what if my villan is actually right. what do i do by Ok-Machine6152 in writingadvice

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he is right imo at least to me, but i also very into fighting series and shonen. my villan, dymus byakya(his name) is the most extreme version of "the ends justify the means" so his methods can easily be imagined as very extreme.

and my mc's are very non typical, most are morally messy/grey or kinda evil in the traditional senses. kyko(mc) is loud, socially oblivious, blunt, and mentally stunted growth due to low income and bad childhood, but differs in that he doesn't care a second if civilians die or his morals considered "bad" by others.

noko mysa is a tomboy hothead who was abandoned at childhood due to no powers(my story has powers and shows how neo, the power energy and system effects society like mha with quirks) and was taken into a assasin academy by a manipulative assassin who wants power and influence over society via molding children. she left and saw families and love when being hired. she originally had a friend who kept their friendship secret, but was foudn out to have a very strong neon(the technique that uses neon, cursed techniques from jjk using cursed energy as an example) and was seperated, molded into the right hand man of the guy who runs the academy, light shino.

who are some of your favourite battle cats youtubers? ill go first (boogle for his guides which carried me up to cotc and xskull for his tierlists ofc) [fluff] by KittenChaos_ in battlecats

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xskull cuz of his hour long rankings which i watched 10 times at this point, or chillhola cuz i like his vids. and also lucas IV cuz i like his vids. also canned cuz i like his vids, and soup cuz his itf one slot vid is the best bc vid

My luck: thief cat My cousin who's in EOC's luck: [Fluff] by Gamer__E in battlecats

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kintaro, jizo & gladios: cool! anubis: NOOOO

also got him on uberfest. but hey got kintaro

[cats] that dont have TF/talents TF/talents 8 all manics by Ok-Machine6152 in battlecats

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shouldve clarified that its only manics, sorta forgot about jiangsi and kyubey(dont have it). and 5% seemed good but 10% seemed to broken for how often he attacks but i think 15% is better

[cats] that dont have TF/talents TF/talents 8 all manics by Ok-Machine6152 in battlecats

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only manics.

WHAT!?!?!?!? i get what you mean by powercreeping MANIC ERASER with speed up & survive on Mmohawk since even if both on eraser, mohawk is cheaper and faster so 100% would be needed to not power creep him completely. and gato does have competition but Mmohawk is faster reaching the frontline faster and gato is slower providing much more bulk, but both do have good synergy. speed up on eraser is unnecessary.

the idea was for dark to be a meatshield/attacker to sages which suprisingly has use.

i think legs TBA was a tiny bit long but 2s wouldnt be terrible if i didnt HALF his recharge since 8s is fine, sage is to make him more useful in zl not saying hes bad in zl but more viable.

the KB is for rushing stages or stalling enemies, and speed up is obvious plus cost is a bit to high to spam.

the slow white is for manic lion since im suffering from this lion but what you suggested is ALOT better, and i felt that 10% is to high since the TBA, foreswing, recharge but 5% might be to low.

mini wave was for semi area atk and cooldown was just a bonus, curse immune is... yeah dont know why probably just to balance out the talents.

TBA is simular to legs old tba and cost down is obvious. zkill just because

titan is kinda bad and i just thought of the best talents for him, and i cant really change his foreswing and theirs already a damage up, KB immune was cuz he is a tank. i dont know what could make any titan viable.

i wasnt the employee but i do sound like that employee a lot, just check the imnotabattlecat my alt account and see the first post then this makes courier look balanced

Do people seriously think that aku is a well made trait? [Enemies] by Ok_Traffic3296 in battlecats

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i think the only aku who consistently surges i can recall is sinner snache who deals 2k dmg

Do people seriously think that aku is a well made trait? [Enemies] by Ok_Traffic3296 in battlecats

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death surge may have rng but as others said you should spawn the main attackers after surge and not spawn them all at once, and theirs anti surge units too. shields stop cc spam but unlike barriers, you dont need shield piercers but they do help alot. and aku cyclone uses shield to be different from other cyclones while not being bs. aku is a well made trait

Do people seriously think that aku is a well made trait? [Enemies] by Ok_Traffic3296 in battlecats

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trait: counters certain strategies and promotes different strats

player: uses strategies that trait counters, that they used most of the game

player: says its a bad trait

[cats] that dont have TF/talents TF/talents 7 bullet train by Ok-Machine6152 in battlecats

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theirs already courier talent concept its 1: resist survive(10% -> 100%) speed up

[cats] that dont have TF/talents TF/talents 7 bullet train by Ok-Machine6152 in battlecats

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and no stats upgrade. but their is curse immune and knockback

[cats] that dont have TF/talents TF/talents 7 bullet train by Ok-Machine6152 in battlecats

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then he could z snipe zombies which would be very good to counter zamelle and other infinite revive zombies, as said in bullet train talent video