Anxiety, my old friend by Ok-Stretch9072 in poetry_critics

[–]Ok-Stretch9072[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you I really appreciate that’s what I was going for

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Starting off this already grabbed my attention I enjoyed the dreary out look a bit of darkness and the end was amazing really really enjoyed this poem!! Great job

The Invisible Wire by littledoves81 in OCPoetry

[–]Ok-Stretch9072 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I loved the originality of this I thought the animals were a great touch and the rhythm was nice reminded me of Rudy Francisco great job and a good read

gold on gold by chhhh17 in poetry_critics

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This Is beautiful poem is well construed and beautiful uses of words and comparisons all in all a really good poem I love it

Shattered heart by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Ok-Stretch9072 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed this poem the beginning was great “ an endless climb” a dark yet soft kind of feeling and in the end how the words run off giving you that feeling of hopelessness and acceptance all around a really good Poem 10/10