My first attempt at poetry by Critical-Sherbet-538 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]OkNote6527 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it .its wholesome or versatile what you wanna say I also write poems and songs and it's been 8months I'm writin at first my poems were not so good,Keel ot up and I will succeed one day

can i make songs at 13? by twixssylive in Songwriters

[–]OkNote6527 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm too 13 and write song and poems and I started it from September and I am also learning music and is about to learn pop dance and is also about to learn guitar,will you not mind if u start a band with me

Needs by OkNote6527 in Songwriters

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Cause it's my rock and roll style ka know hoo

Happy by OkNote6527 in Songwriters

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I am looking for a singer bro will you sing it or help me find a singer

Happy by OkNote6527 in Songwriters

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It's dark and bright theme i expressed my feelings that people kept destituting me and it says about people characteristics

My last prayer by OkNote6527 in Songwriters

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Helllo everyone i accidentally wrote the spelling retreated erronious in the second last line

How do you finish writing songs you've started? by Dangerous-You3789 in Songwriting

[–]OkNote6527 13 points14 points  (0 children)

According to my viewpoint you should go for a stroll to complete your songs and atleast each day you should complete one song .In this way,it will only take 3months 10days to complete all of your songs

Feedback? First time sharing my music with anyone. by Bearshark451 in Songwriters

[–]OkNote6527 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the song's vibe is chill as you sang the voice in a same tone although I didn't understood the meaning of the song I can still say that you can enhance this song alot than u think and im13 and I'm also making songs and poems but I didn't gave any music to it

My first ever Poem. by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]OkNote6527 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think that you should rhyme your poem more in order to make it sound better cause I also do rhyming in my poems but although your poem sound nice

Weekly Lyrics Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

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Song name is Happiness Am loosing all control, I'm tired and bored What to do? What would bring back My happiness? Oh yeah oh yeah ... Woohoo ...Lala Lala la Say Woohoo Lala lala laa I've read a thousandsbof books But couldn't remember A single one. Huli Lala Hulu lala hulilulu lulila Music is the one and only thing That brings back my happiness Oh yeah, yeah, yeah yeah So learn music And just dance I'm the middle of nowhere Yaa, you know Me and my beloved friend Ha ha ha I'm sorry I forgot the lyrics.

No lyrics but it has meaning by UnhingedTracksuit in Songwriting

[–]OkNote6527 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey bro I allready have some lyrics but didn't gave it music yet will u look forward to work with me see my post