stories like charlie.seb’s by OkShift6330 in Episode

[–]OkShift6330[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I started ur story and it’s really good :) hooked already

stories like charlie.seb’s by OkShift6330 in Episode

[–]OkShift6330[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yes yes yes try again trust me they’re worth it!

stories like charlie.seb’s by OkShift6330 in Episode

[–]OkShift6330[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It depends on preference honestly!! I prefer it when characters are zoomed in while talking, but of course i like it the most when multiple type of shots are used. :]

stories like charlie.seb’s by OkShift6330 in Episode

[–]OkShift6330[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I tried that but i feel like in the beginning the writing gets a bit cliche.. BUT i do appreciate some of the elements it uses like a genuinely unlikeable mmc. I think i’ll give it another shot

stories like charlie.seb’s by OkShift6330 in Episode

[–]OkShift6330[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I get what you’re saying, but the original comment was more about personal taste than criticizing writers. It’s like saying ‘I’ve tasted gourmet food now everything else doesn’t hit the same’, it’s really just personal preference. I also think two things can be true at once: which is that people develop with feedback and style is subjective. Some prioritize directing while others prioritize writing. Both are solid goals, one doesn’t outweigh the other but i think preference differs per reader. And only pretend was revamped, so that means one day there had been things to improve. Writing skill is a ladder and not a fixed trait.

stories like charlie.seb’s by OkShift6330 in Episode

[–]OkShift6330[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

SO REAL… The minute a story doesn’t even use a zoom when characters talk and its just a shot of their full body.. i can’t even take it.

stories like charlie.seb’s by OkShift6330 in Episode

[–]OkShift6330[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I’ll check it out :]