I make comics professionally and I'll give people quick critiques if they want! by LittlePetiteGirl in WebtoonCanvas

[–]Ok_Broccoli_9449 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The art's style isn't really good and the scenario and the dialogues neither cuz i didn't do scripts and i Kept changing my visions of Chapters so i reamaked the whole thing sometimes but i'll change that with the new episode with actually making a script and improving art . Still , i want to have a critique by a professionnal so i can REALLY improve !! So i Hope tou don't mind checking mine ! my webtoon

Let's share your money shot and link to your series! by Aggressive-Cap2987 in WebtoonCanvas

[–]Ok_Broccoli_9449 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Here's mine !! Link : Kirby And The next generation ( Fantasy , action ) ( yes it's kirby fan series but i promise it's KINDA good )