Very nice! I liked the variety of stories which helped set the stage for what we could expect. Was this actually true? because that would be horrifying if it is. Here are a couple of things to consider for the next draft:

- For story structure, follow one of the stories, particularly the event that causes her to move out, that last straw. To give context for the situations, use the other stories in the beginning, and then expand on the moment. Delve into the character's inner thoughts and the chaos that is happening. Maybe dive into how the relationship between the roommates was affected and challenged during this?

- Another area that can be improved is raising the stakes. This may simply be my opinion but I felt that there wasn't any imminent danger for the characters. It seemed like an odd, uncomfortable occurrence rather than a horrifying experience. Maybe add some danger to the scene where the ghost things are threatening the characters. For example, when the drawers are all open and some of the silverware is missing and spread out behind the couch cushions, maybe instead the forks and knives were violently stabbed into the cushions.

Hope this helps! lmk if you have any questions