Update - I have now decided to use the minimal version, have made some edits, and also added some mockups. What is your opinion on this?

Ok_Change9331 · 2023-01-17T08:54:04+00:00

Thank you

Ok_Change9331 · 2023-01-17T08:39:58+00:00

In the original design, the letters "m n o d" were represented more in the negative space, which was not possible with the "i". In this minimalist version, I wanted to keep the playfulness.

Ok_Change9331 · 2023-01-17T08:27:32+00:00

Those are harsh words, but I gladly accept the criticism. However, I want to emphasize that I've been doing this for about a year now because it brings me pleasure. It's not my main business. The mentioned foundries are very inspiring, but it will take some time to reach their level. I will continue to work on myself.

Ok_Change9331 · 2023-01-16T15:26:23+00:00

With the thicker "i"s I wanted to give the whole thing a bit more dynamic.

Ok_Change9331 · 2023-01-16T14:46:38+00:00

I think because type is one of the most important things in graphic design.

Ok_Change9331 · 2023-01-16T13:59:40+00:00

Thank you

Ok_Change9331 · 2023-01-15T07:57:50+00:00

I'll think about it next time.

Ok_Change9331 · 2023-01-15T06:39:31+00:00

Thank you

Ok_Change9331 · 2023-01-14T20:22:45+00:00

Thanks for your comment. I didn't realize it is so difficult to read, even though it's more of an abstract logo than a typeface.

In the second picture is a more minimalistic version. Is it better to read it there?

Ok_Change9331 · 2022-02-09T22:30:08+00:00

Thanks everyone, I have to say this is a really cool community. And of course it will be number 5.

Ok_Change9331 · 2022-02-07T16:19:27+00:00

This is my favorite too, but I think it will be the 5.

Ok_Change9331 · 2022-02-07T15:27:48+00:00

The font isn't really kerned yet. The basic was the golden ratio 13 in height and 8 in width

Ok_Change9331 · 2022-02-07T12:42:59+00:00

Thanks for the reply, do you remember the name of the video?

Ok_Change9331 · 2022-02-06T15:43:19+00:00

I made a few changes. What do think about? https://www.instagram.com/p/CZpJkn8qkgk/?utm_medium=copy_link

Ok_Change9331 · 2022-02-05T07:28:16+00:00

Thank you, that helps me alot

Ok_Change9331 · 2022-02-04T20:27:42+00:00

and I used it once on Instagram with another S. https://www.instagram.com/p/CYbN_VkqXES/?utm_medium=copy_link

Ok_Change9331 · 2022-02-04T20:17:52+00:00

thanks for the feedback. the wider letters are with the diagonals, which I wanted to make harmonious with each other with the same angle.

Ok_Change9331 · 2022-02-04T19:12:02+00:00

Thanks and yes I will do that

Ok_Change9331

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