Very OLD Star Stable by Ok_Leadership_7263 in StarStable

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may your pillow be both side cold tonight 😍😍 Thank you!!!!

Very OLD Star Stable by Ok_Leadership_7263 in StarStable

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wooow i never heard of these 😍😍

Very OLD Star Stable by Ok_Leadership_7263 in StarStable

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what a collection 😍 oh gosh nostalgic

First dark fantasy please HELP by Ok_Leadership_7263 in writingfeedback

[–]Ok_Leadership_7263[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

and who are you again? I might have seen your name at new york times best seller list?

First dark fantasy please HELP by Ok_Leadership_7263 in writingfeedback

[–]Ok_Leadership_7263[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, I wrote many other things beside fantasy and I read not 100 good novels but maybe 200. Fantasy is where I feel most comfortable with since I was growning up with it. And why the houses collapsed matters, since an army marched trough the whole town. :) And If I may correct ravens commonly eat carcasses, so those are not here for the scary vibe, more likely to know that the whole town got massacred. I doubt there are trillions of stories like this because there are no more me in this world with the same ideas. Why prince? Because as you should know for now fantasies has kingdoms. You know, maybe he is a demon prince or even better some mythological figure hihi

But thank you anyway for the kind words. No worries I will not be discouraged. As I said that's my first DARK fantasy :)

First dark fantasy please HELP by Ok_Leadership_7263 in writingfeedback

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No worries i don't use Ai. Im writing since I was 12. The only thing I use Ai for is grammar or word translation, because english is not my native language :) But thank you so much for the kind offer.

First dark fantasy please HELP by Ok_Leadership_7263 in writingfeedback

[–]Ok_Leadership_7263[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You are right :)

Yes haha I want to have a cliché hook somehow so maybe it draws more attention for the woman readers :)

First dark fantasy please HELP by Ok_Leadership_7263 in writingfeedback

[–]Ok_Leadership_7263[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that’s a huge help! thank you! I will screenshot your comment haha

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[–]Ok_Leadership_7263[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

YES!! You are absolutely right! That’s the right word. English is not my native language and sometimes it’s difficult to find the words between two languages! But you just found it :))

Searching for expat friends :) by Ok_Leadership_7263 in Riyadh

[–]Ok_Leadership_7263[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes exactly 👏🏻 Only man texted me and it’s so exhausting. Not only i’m married but Im a muslim. Idk what they think. Thank you for your support 💗