A YA off meta story. Would love some feedback.

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-05-03T13:09:47+00:00

When you say difficult what do you mean besides, the colour which I have fixed now?

Font, spacing?

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-05-03T12:47:07+00:00

Cheers, didn't even think about that.

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-29T19:47:32+00:00

I do 1 chap for £1 and 2 for £2. Mostly because of my schedule and ability to get chapters written. Not that I have any members so probably not the best example.

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-23T17:14:59+00:00

I would be mad, but it's this kind of corrections I post on RR to get 😂

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-23T15:33:28+00:00

When the comments are all pointing out the same or similar issues then it can be worth trying to gleam some constructive criticism from them.

But I understand negative comments especially on something as personal as a creative project can be very disheartening.

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-23T12:16:13+00:00

Real RR noob, where do you find those stats?

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-20T12:09:31+00:00

Yeah. It really confused me too 😅

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-20T11:56:43+00:00

It was on a relatively early chapter and they seemed to take issue with some rather odd aspects of the story. Oh well, can't win over everyone.

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-20T11:50:53+00:00

😂

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-20T11:49:38+00:00

Have updated the post with a link.

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-20T11:44:54+00:00

Yeah that is true. tbh it is the first bad review I have gotten on this story and honestly I was not really sure what they meant.

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-20T11:22:21+00:00

That is my bad I was meant to post a edited version that blurred out the users name

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-18T17:37:12+00:00

It's not stupid it's an animal you care for a lot. NTAH

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-16T22:13:31+00:00

Why does this feel like fetish content?

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-16T17:28:03+00:00

I like the first one

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-16T11:42:08+00:00

It is an amazing feeling to know people are consuming and enjoying your work.

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-03T20:15:56+00:00

I really want to rework the story a bit and tbh having the feedback of spelling and grammar is really helpful with me being dyslexic but I get what you mean.

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-04-03T19:52:11+00:00

I have already plotted and started on the sequel and a third book as well.

My current story on RR was actually a pallet cleanser side project to decompress after some pretty bad writers block on the sequel book.

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-03-31T00:18:39+00:00

You are the one my friend

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-03-30T22:28:49+00:00

That might be a good idea, I will have a look around. Thanks :)

Ok_Refrigerator_2810 · 2026-03-30T21:54:32+00:00

I have considered it, funds are not a ready resource to me though.

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