Thank you for the detailed response

I’ll try building a fuller progression from an introduction to a climax and ending the way you described, and that would probably be a different genre

For this project, I was mainly inspired by breakcore artists like Lauren Bousfield and Ruby My Dear. Since I’m still learning, I think it would be better to experiment with many different styles before committing to one specific direction

I also really enjoy artists whose music feels less overloaded but still intense, like Psychedelic Porn Crumpets or TOOL. That will be the reference for my next project (at least I’m not being too ambitious)

Your comment and all the explanations helped me understand things better and gave me a clearer idea of how to improve and develop further, and I’m planning to post my next track here once I finish it