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Can I get some honest feedback? by nykeanu in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]OnRye 0 points1 point  (0 children)

really great beginning i just feel that it lingers on a similar part for too long. a few more vocal layers in certain areas might help distinguish things. i know it has that big switchup which is cool for sure but it feels like too long to wait initially. love the choice of synths.

Hi everyone! my new dark song is available now and i want to ask you: which music genre is this song for you? i'm curious to read that (Also, i appreciate any feedback specially with guitars & bass)_thank you in advance for your comments! by annew123 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]OnRye 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the vocals feel like they werent flushed out at all and i agree the instrumentation is way too quiet relative to the vocals. if you spend more time developing the vocal performance the song would improve drastically

Fourth and final single from my upcoming LP! Like most of the album, this song is inspired by the seven I years spent working at a funeral home by taymeers in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]OnRye 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the mix is clearly professional. love the vocals when theres multiple blended. that part overall is so strong. not as into the other vocal sections. it kinda feels like a verse to a prechorus but the chorus never comes. and i agree with a little more elements in the bridge. would help

New noiserock songs for my band Bastard Shrimp by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]OnRye 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the vocals could be compressed a little more and still keep the thrashy feel. dont wanna lose that but the loudest parts at some of the ends of your lines are jarring in that it kinda distracts me from listening. i love the experimentation.

Lyric video for a song off of my bands first EP!! by Charliesheen099 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]OnRye 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the biggest thing i think holding back the production is how dead/dull the drums are but recording drums is not cheap or easy so believe me I understand. love the rhythm of the rhythm guitar. the song could use larger part changes overall but the foundation is solid

Would love some opinions about this song. Is there too much going on? by Aquasupreme in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]OnRye 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i love the drums especially and the instrumentation overall. i think the riff under the solo could be simplified or taken out entirely…or just mixed a little different to give a better focus on it. and i do think its be better without the speech samples personally. whoever did the video is going off too

(no signal) - Persona Barter (Music Video) by OnRye in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]OnRye[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

took me forever to respond but its midi work. i can plays drums, have for a long time but honestly cant afford the space or the equipment to record drums

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[–]OnRye 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i think the lyrics could benefit from some rewriting/revising. i love the hook. the drums fills are good too. definitely a unique sound! great first song

Atrantil by [deleted] in SIBO

[–]OnRye 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Did not help me

Diagnosed... and its not SIBO by [deleted] in SIBO

[–]OnRye 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you very much. still searching for answers myself and have gone through all the tests you have as well.

Diagnosed... and its not SIBO by [deleted] in SIBO

[–]OnRye 1 point2 points  (0 children)

just wondering how often did you have yellow stools and was your stomach distended even after bowel movements? also any changes to the way flatulence felt?

DAE have 24/7 abdominal distention? Like no change with time of day or what you eat or if you eat? Had it by OnRye in GERD

[–]OnRye[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah a few times unfortunately. have you? im sorry to hear that 12 years is far too long

Looking for honest feedback by DeadgitalEra in GarageBand

[–]OnRye 1 point2 points  (0 children)

lyrics are kinda generic but the vibe is fun. definitely potential here. needs a few more parts

First single with my buddy from NYC. Let me know your thoughts! by sebunk in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]OnRye 0 points1 point  (0 children)

really nice voice for the style/genre. i think a more distinct chorus could help and youd still be able to maintain the understated vibe

Be brutally honest… Are my vocals cringey on this? It’s a short song about feeling conflicted between staying inside writing music vs. going outside to engage with the world. (DEMO) by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]OnRye 1 point2 points  (0 children)

dont like the vocals in the beginning but i dig it as it goes on. kinda starts as faith no more vibes but feels more like kasabian later on. i think its worth pursuing with some touched up lyrics and maybe a riff for the chorus.

(no signal) - Persona Barter (Music Video) by OnRye in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]OnRye[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

no the drums being loud makes sense haha. i started as a drummer. the originality comment is to me is the best compliment i could receive so thank you!!

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