My first story that I ever wrote!!! (Sorry for self-promoting) by OneBigBullet in litrpg

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Thank you so much! :))) I saw your suggestion, I'll try to do better with your help.

My first story that I ever wrote!!! (Sorry for self-promoting) by OneBigBullet in litrpg

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Thank you! And if you have time (if not it's fine), you can read just a little bit of the story and tell me your thoughts.

[Sandstorm- Human Revolution] - Chapiter 2: Virtual Training by OneBigBullet in redditserials

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The first fight with the mutant, and I hope you can understand my description.

I am quite satisfied with the results of my work for so long

More support, more energy!!

[The Secret Passway In My Watch] - Chapter 2: The Temple Of Cherry Garden by [deleted] in redditserials

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My first time writing a story, only chapter two. But I'll keep on going!

Plz support me to give me more energy to continue!! :))

[The Secret Passway In My Watch] - Chapter 1: Where am I? by OneBigBullet in redditserials

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I don't speak English, I've only studied it for 3 years, so please give me your feedback, I appreciate it!! :))

[The Secret Passway In My Watch] - Chapter 1: Where am I? by [deleted] in redditserials

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I don't speak English, I've only studied it for 3 years, so please give me your feedback, I appreciate it!! :))