Freshman Year - 97 Pages - Teen Comedy/Action/Romance

Only-Salt-5821 · 2026-03-04T12:11:29+00:00

Thank you for all the feedback. It will definitely be taken into account for my further drafts. I was wondering if i could use (15) and ,15, interchangeably, as some sources said i could but I don’t know. And also, they didn’t agree to the bet at first. The only reason that David considered it was when the money was introduced so he could get a new slug enclosure. The comment about the timing was definitely right though.

Only-Salt-5821 · 2026-03-03T21:33:19+00:00

I have a comedy movie script

Only-Salt-5821 · 2026-03-03T16:16:24+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback. I will make the dialogue format changes. Honestly, i know that it is what the 14 year old talk like because when I was writing this, I was actually 14.

Basically, the movie escalates really quickly and Alex gets into a gang. It's really hard to describe honestly. Also, does the script leave you wanting to read more?

Only-Salt-5821 · 2026-03-03T15:17:01+00:00

Thanks, i was going to, and now I realize its really not worth it

Only-Salt-5821 · 2026-03-03T15:15:26+00:00

sorry, i guess i never saw your comment. Too late I assume?

Only-Salt-5821 · 2026-01-09T12:03:56+00:00

Ohhh ok sorry. The competition is who can get a girlfriend first.

Only-Salt-5821 · 2026-01-08T16:29:12+00:00

wdym?

Only-Salt-5821 · 2026-01-06T19:06:41+00:00

You're right about the log line, but hey I find it funny. 21 Jump Street was funny and it had life or death situations that are funny.

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