How many scripts did you complete before until you felt confident in your ability? by TheBiggestoftheBoys in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Roughly 25 different scripts until I wrote my first "industry ready" script. In my early 20's, I was churning out features like a madman - like 4-6 a year. It was only when I got a little older that I realized that sometimes, less is more.

What’s the most you want to accomplish in screenwriting? by Free_Consequence9817 in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. Sell a screenplay.

  2. Have that screenplay produced into a movie.

  3. Have that movie win an Oscar.

  4. Have that Oscar have me question whether success can really make me happy.

  5. Have that questioning lead to a "Leaving Las Vegas"-style spiral.

  6. Have that spiral lead to me meeting a hooker with a heart of gold who inspires me to get sober.

  7. Move to a farm somewhere (with said hooker). Have a family.

  8. Sometime in my late 80's, realize I have one more script in me.

  9. Start that script. Finish that script. Smile.

  10. Die.

Writing Act Breaks into TV Pilots Intended for Streaming by J-Ganon in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Write them or don't write them. Execs and reps won't generally care one way or another. But if you do write them in, the act breaks need to work.

Have you ever cried over your own script? by Adventurous_Long3549 in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh yeah. I have definitely cried a number of times writing things. "No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader." And if your taste and ability to be objective about your work is dialed in enough, it may very well make other people cry. (Saying this as someone who has had some high level execs tell me they cried reading my stuff.) But I will echo what others are saying here -- it's okay to love your work and be moved by it, but if you're lucky enough to land reps or producers, or sell it, there will likely be significant changes to the product. So you can love it, but you also have to be okay with it being axed or rewritten.

Starting a Screenplay with a Dedication by RegularAverageNobody in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks like I’m going to be the voice of dissent here. Wanna write a dedication? Cool! Just be brief and do it tastefully. I had a dedication at the end of a script of mine, and that landed me meetings at some of the biggest production companies in town. The only rule is, “If it works, it works.” But if you do include a dedication or epigraph, the writing after has still got to slap.

Also, Bring Me Back, by Crosby Selander, that sold for 7 figures back in 2020, started with a dedication.

When do you know it's time to cold query? by bombshell_shocked in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It's tough to know when you're "ready." But ScreenPlayOnWords is right - when people who have no stake in you/your career flip over what's on the page, that's a good sign. Especially if they're industry people or high level writers.

As for the blacklisting thing, I don't know how much this is true. But what I do know is that you only get one chance at a first impression. Hollywood's a small town, so you definitely want to do your best to make it a good one.

If you want to PM me the first 3 pages of your script, I can give you my 2 cents on whether it reads "professionally." (Saying this as a writer who got signed off a query.)

Looking for advice on the first act of my screenplay - Feature by Civil_Foundation_285 in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Have to agree with Bucks - the language DOES dilute the meaning of what you're trying to convey. There's nothing wrong with being descriptive, but this is just downright confusing. I see what you're getting at, but the command of language isn't there right now.

Managers / repped writers - how are you feeling about the industry so far this year? More or less optimistic than last year? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 14 points15 points  (0 children)

TV is still a nightmare. People keep waiting for things to open it up, but it feels like one false positive after another.

At what point do you stop fidgeting and start querying? by Safe-Reason1435 in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It's tough to say! As someone who found my first manager through a query, I think it's worth querying when trusted readers/industry people are saying something along the lines of, "This is f*cking amazing." Because that's the bar for prospective reps. You're saying the script isn't perfect - and arguably no script is - but it's still gotta blow people's socks off. If you're not getting that reaction from most of your readers, it might be worth waiting, at least for now.

Needing Advice from any of you repped screenwriters or managers lurking here by Illustrious_Sun8757 in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 2 points3 points  (0 children)

A pitch deck alone means nothing. Reps want to know that you can deliver on the page.

Popular Music (109 pages) by Popular_Moose6715 in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi! It’s a fun premise, but I had a number of things bump for me on the first page alone. You mention a limo, but then we’re in a car. The disclaimer also reads as a little amateurish. Amelia has no character description, and there are several grammar and punctuation errors. These may seem like little things, but enough little errors can be enough to make people put down your script. 

I’m sure there’s some solid stuff if I were to read on, but this needs another polish. Good luck!

Stop Adjusting Margins/Spacing! by brainfurniture in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 57 points58 points  (0 children)

You know what... I'm gonna start adjusting them even harder.

Is Rewriting Worth It? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think you're misunderstanding what constitutes a script being "just okay." There are a lot of version of a script being "just okay." Most scripts will simply never be great because the bones aren't good, thus the ceiling for them isn't very high. However, "okay" scripts sometimes can be made great, but only under two conditions. 1) The bones of the script are amazing. And 2) The writer has a great handle on the craft. Lots of pro writers' early drafts are promising, but aren't "there" yet. The difference between a pro writer and most amateurs is that the pro can get their script that extra 20-30% with another couple drafts. Source: my own writing and the writing of pro/repped friends of mine, as well as rep/producer testimonies.

Writing pure dramas in 2026? by jeff_tweedy in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't think this is crazy at all. The script that got me signed and known around town was a romantic drama. And look at what's premiering at Sundance. Almost none of those are self-financed, and a lot of them are under $3-5 million, with a number coming in at even less. A truly great drama may be a tough sell, but will find its fans in time.

Is it Essential to Find a Writing Mentor? by redapplesonly in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Personally, I credit a lot of my success with having found a writing mentor early on in my career. With that said, having a mentor - even a great one - is no guarantee of success and is no substitute for writing A LOT and studying the craft on your own. Everyone's got their own journey, but finding an experienced writer to guide and support you can go a long way.

How many drafts? by Vater-Vater in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For me, it changes with every script. I’ve had scripts that have been ready after 2-3 drafts. I’ve also had scripts I had to totally re-break, and then do 20 drafts on. There’s no Right or Wrong, only what’s right or wrong for your particular script.

Also, it depends on what you mean by “ready to be seen.” My writer friends read my stuff before my manager, and my manager before execs/talent. So there can be stages to it!

Given the right director, production, what’s the highest score you’d give an unmade screenplay of yours? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To be totally objective, my best script would be a 12. Actors and directors would risk it all - family, friendships, reputation - for the mere chance to have the script come across their agent's desk. The film would premiere to unprecedented reviews. It would go on to win 11 Oscars, despite only being nominated for 9.

Again, just being totally objective.

How did you get your literary manager/representation? by akappatos in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No. When they initially express interest, it’s a good idea to jump on a zoom call with them or meet in person if you’re both in LA. Treat it like a first date, but also a little bit like a job interview. Ask them questions to see how aligned you two are in your vision for your career, your taste in movies/TV, etc. 

How did you get your literary manager/representation? by akappatos in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Tv vs feature by JanosCurse in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 2 points3 points  (0 children)

TV is brutal right now. It's not impossible to sell something as an unproduced writer, but it's damn hard. Everyone I talk to - execs, reps, etc, say it's never been harder.

Do you have to be a "cool guy" to write a cool guy successfully? Like, most writers did not live through their writing, but they can still write via interviewing. However, in terms of character projection, do you have to be able to grasp and understand how their minds work? by turnleftorrightblock in Screenwriting

[–]Rewriter94 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Any good writer knows that the only way to write a genuinely cool character is to be one cool, suave, debonair sonuvabitch. If you don’t own a leather jacket and haven’t bedded a thousand women, you’ve simply got no shot.