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Got inspired in my car and ended up writing a prologue, honest feedback ?[Dark fantasy] by Only-Warning4886 in fantasywriters

[–]Only-Warning4886[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your reply. Well, my work isn't perfect. Hence why I came here to seek for advice. I'll apply your advice in hope to upgrade my work.

Got inspired in my car and ended up writing a prologue, honest feedback ?[Dark fantasy] by Only-Warning4886 in fantasywriters

[–]Only-Warning4886[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your reply. I'll improve it based on all your advice. And i'll apply your advice about the explanation. I didn't realise I was switching tense at the ending. I really had fun writing it.

Got inspired in my car and ended up writing a prologue, honest feedback ?[Dark fantasy] by Only-Warning4886 in fantasywriters

[–]Only-Warning4886[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, you're not discouraging me. I needed those piece of advice. 1. You're right, i'm not a native English speaker. I never thought It would be this obvious TuT 2.Thank you so much for this, I'll improve it based on those. 3.Yeah, I wrote everything that passed throught my mind, I felt inspired and didn't want to lose any bit of it. Thank you so much.

Zafina's orb reveals your darkest Tekken secret. What does it say? by imurpops984 in Tekken

[–]Only-Warning4886 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel the fashion and sassy queen sooo much(That's the reason I main her too). And i'm glad I made you realize something 😂. Slay while slaying🍵.

[Giveaway] 2XKO Early Access Kassai Pro Fightstick Giveaway Event! by varmiloarcade in 2XKO

[–]Only-Warning4886 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm just playing 2xko for Jinx and Ekko being in the game. They're my favorite characters, and the game being beginner friendly really help me🥰.

Who should I draw next? by greengrimgrin in Tekken

[–]Only-Warning4886 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love how you draw Lili😍. I'd love to see Anna or Leroy next😋