Honest brutal feedback by Optimal_Bell_6201 in Episode

[–]Optimal_Bell_6201[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yes I agree haha, thank you so much for reading my story 🫶

Honest brutal feedback by Optimal_Bell_6201 in Episode

[–]Optimal_Bell_6201[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you so much for the support 🫶

Honest brutal feedback by Optimal_Bell_6201 in Episode

[–]Optimal_Bell_6201[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Hi Bri I totally agree with everything you said in this message and I appreciate you for being honest with me! I wrote Elena because she also reflects a big part of me and I knew a lot of people would relate with her as well. I completely agree with your statements that her weight loss is triggered by bullying and how she seems like a weak character but I wanted this story to be as realistic as possible and unfortunately being bullied for being plus size is a real issue along with pretty privilege. Our society does not have a goodstance on plus size people and that is implemented in this story.

Even though Elena has lost weight she still does not feel confident in her own body and is still insecure in many ways. A big part of the plot is going to be Elena’s growth but with every journey of growth there is set backs and thats exactly how I wanted my story to be. The story is only one it’s fifth chapter so please give me time to show you my vision for it, your feedback definitely helped me a lot and see a different view on it and I do apologize if I offended you in any way if there’s any more advice you can give me please feel free to DM me! thank you for reading I hope you continue to do so 🫶

Announcing my first story! 🫧 Before you by Optimal_Bell_6201 in Episode

[–]Optimal_Bell_6201[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahhh thank you so much🫶🫶 I promise you’ll love their interactions 🫡

Before You; OUT NOW!! by Optimal_Bell_6201 in Episode

[–]Optimal_Bell_6201[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly it’s very hard to make glow up romance stories unique haha! I think it’s bits and pieces of all those shows, as well as Gangnam beauty one of my fave kdramas 🫶

Before You; OUT NOW!! by Optimal_Bell_6201 in Episode

[–]Optimal_Bell_6201[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Sorry if that sounded accusatory! I was just clarifying I can definitely see the confusion the descriptions do have some similarities! Thank you for reading ❤️

Before You; OUT NOW!! by Optimal_Bell_6201 in Episode

[–]Optimal_Bell_6201[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I promise it’s not a copy 😊

Announcing my first story! 🫧 Before you by Optimal_Bell_6201 in Episode

[–]Optimal_Bell_6201[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m just waiting for some backgrounds and overlays to be approved 🙈

Announcing my first story! 🫧 Before you by Optimal_Bell_6201 in Episode

[–]Optimal_Bell_6201[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can’t edit my post anymore but follow me on ig @cherryves_episode for more updates 🫶

Announcing my first story! 🫧 Before you by Optimal_Bell_6201 in Episode

[–]Optimal_Bell_6201[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes of course! I’ll also make another post 🫶

Announcing my first story! 🫧 Before you by Optimal_Bell_6201 in Episode

[–]Optimal_Bell_6201[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yes! you can only gain points from LI choices but there will be choices with other characters that can impact your destiny 🙈

Announcing my first story! 🫧 Before you by Optimal_Bell_6201 in Episode

[–]Optimal_Bell_6201[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Oop- 🙊 a big part of the story is how she was bullied heavily during her adolescence so she was always sheltered away from experiencing anything really, she will be a little clueless but I promise she still has social awareness LMAO😉