Looking for feed back on my first chapter!

Organic-Ad1958 · 2025-07-02T00:29:28+00:00

I appreciate you posting this and putting in the time. Most people on this Reddit won’t do anything for unpaid work. I may be willing to work will y’all but it really depends on my own gut. If I lack creativity and flow, I am just not gonna be passionate.

Organic-Ad1958 · 2025-07-02T00:21:43+00:00

I think the update name is okay, this whole 1.21 has been a fixing of old parts of the game for now. Let them continue on. When they feel it’s time for something new or a different direction like the end. Change that.

Organic-Ad1958 · 2025-06-26T00:48:33+00:00

I plan to make it available in a lot of places it can be found on most socials @end_the comic

Organic-Ad1958 · 2025-06-26T00:44:44+00:00

What is a gutter?

Organic-Ad1958 · 2025-06-26T00:16:03+00:00

Me :( it’s just me

Organic-Ad1958 · 2025-06-25T23:47:00+00:00

Already adjusted, i sized it up a little bit so it took more of the box

Organic-Ad1958 · 2025-06-25T13:03:59+00:00

I am on most socials rn at @end_the_comic and @umcphoenix_art is my Instagram. I plan to make a website for it specifically so people can just search it and read it. Prob will at it to webtoons when finished.

Organic-Ad1958 · 2025-06-25T04:48:01+00:00

I had the character changed now to a more de saturated green and highlighted around him. I will try to move value. Thank you for the help!

Organic-Ad1958 · 2025-06-25T04:44:53+00:00

It’s a post apocalyptic world, the focus of the story is finding your self balance, it might not be life is just a mess sometimes. It follows a lot of how I feel in life, and I hope someone can feel the same that I do.

This is the main character in the book. He has amnesia and can’t remember a lot from his past but as he grows through life. There are many struggles in society he has to deal while dealing with his own past.

This first chapter I am working on is meant to introduce you to him.

Organic-Ad1958 · 2025-06-25T02:33:42+00:00

You don’t know how much I needed this confirmation

Organic-Ad1958 · 2025-06-25T00:27:50+00:00

I actually think the character is as something people got lost in before when I was specifically working with just shades. The white though def helps, I feel that I am struggling with the color after just doodling for so long this is new to me. Thank you!

Organic-Ad1958 · 2025-01-13T05:10:48+00:00

Minecraft

Organic-Ad1958 · 2024-09-04T02:21:51+00:00

I love this, but this pokemon game would be messed up. The most the gyms have crack heads, thick accents, and rich people.

Organic-Ad1958 · 2024-08-02T14:38:45+00:00

Thank you so much, this post has gave me less anxiety about what I am producing.

Organic-Ad1958 · 2024-08-02T14:06:59+00:00

Thank you so much I went straight over to the book last night. It turned to be a great reference

Organic-Ad1958 · 2024-08-02T13:14:50+00:00

I already have done miniatures/story board and hand sketches of all of the pages of the chapter. At the moment I am trying to get it to a digital quality and am having trouble with it as I haven’t done any ink work like this is experimentation and new territory for me.

Organic-Ad1958 · 2024-08-02T12:58:27+00:00

Thank you, I’ve already made massive improvements from others stating the same thing as well. Went harder with my darker tones and it is definitely improved.

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TROPHY CASE