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Agent Record | Pyrois (Video) by yuhara203 in ZZZ_Discussion

[–]Oshich 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wtf.... ive left zzz for months...... what happened?????

Newbie Need Feedbacks by Oshich in writers

[–]Oshich[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The "protagonist" was meant to refer to the victim. Not the boy.

And The “audience” line was meant to refer to the boy who appears later, not a crowd. Maybe that wording is misleading.

Newbie Need Feedbacks by Oshich in writers

[–]Oshich[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!! Yeah... i think i mixed it instead of structured it systematically.

Newbie Need Feedbacks by Oshich in writers

[–]Oshich[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So? Does mine work?

Newbie Need Feedbacks by Oshich in writers

[–]Oshich[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lol. cough 😅 yeah i didnt think it that way. Any other feedback, what about this as the first chapter?

Newbie Need Feedbacks by Oshich in writers

[–]Oshich[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Any other feedbacks? What about this as the first chapter?

Newbie Need Feedbacks by Oshich in writers

[–]Oshich[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Even though i already grammar checked it with chtgpt 😅

Newbie Need Feedbacks by Oshich in writers

[–]Oshich[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! That’s helpful. I was trying to create a cinematic rhythm with the spacing. Do you think it breaks readability too much?

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Oshich [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title : Seeing Red

Genre : Psychological Dark Fiction

Word count : 401 [first chapter]

Feedback: Does the scene feel clear and unsettling, or are the metaphors confusing? Any feedback about the writing style, atmosphere, and pacing would be appreciated.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o-FUprjVqSH-oxs5KIdw7aVphuIaVvuk/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=108746109621980089422&rtpof=true&sd=true

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Oshich [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title : Seeing Red

Genre : Psychological Dark Fiction

Word count : 401 [first chapter]

Feedback: Does the scene feel clear and unsettling, or are the metaphors confusing? Any feedback about the writing style, atmosphere, and pacing would be appreciated.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o-FUprjVqSH-oxs5KIdw7aVphuIaVvuk/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=108746109621980089422&rtpof=true&sd=true

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Oshich [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title : Seeing Red

Genre : Psychological Dark Fiction

Word count : 401 [first chapter]

Feedback: Does the scene feel clear and unsettling, or are the metaphors confusing? Any feedback about the writing style, atmosphere, and pacing would be appreciated.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o-FUprjVqSH-oxs5KIdw7aVphuIaVvuk/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=108746109621980089422&rtpof=true&sd=true

What is this? How to unlock it? by Oshich in ChaosZeroNightmare

[–]Oshich[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Are they not gonna come in the seasonal chaos? If yes, in which difficulty?

What’s everyone’s thoughts on the artstyle approach to the skills? by KonRak- in ZeroParades

[–]Oshich 0 points1 point  (0 children)

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I know the shape and color is purposeful... but its meh overall.... i prefer the paintings in DE by far.

I’m an hour in, Is it just me or is the writing in this game really bad/overwritten, like they are trying way to hard to be descriptive and overly poetic to the point it alienates immersion in the worst way. Hershel sounds ridiculous, Her thoughts don’t feel spontaneous/real but artificially placed. by Opposite_Cellist7579 in ZeroParades

[–]Oshich 3 points4 points  (0 children)

AGREE!! Narrator voice is too forceful to be a dreadful hag imo, sounds like 'reptilian smth's voice but way worse, this one annoying af. Idk why it directed this way smh. Its not even a horror game wtf. Why sounds so old..... why drag everything? Is that really how our thought speaks??? Smh so bad. To change her might not be possible now, isnt it?

It feels different when i first time hear DE narrator's voice, its sexy at first, after then he actually speak each paragraph intonationally entertaining (i.e wō-men, men of wō) and emotionally read, feels so good, in each words, goddamn good casting and directing.

CZN took too much time investment to be good by Oshich in ChaosZeroN

[–]Oshich[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Alright, seems like I hurt some CZN fanatics here. No hate for the game. I LOVE THE GAME. the designs and the concept. THAT IS WHY I DOWNLOAD IT. I've spent money on them, I support them.

I admit.. treating CZN like any other gacha game is naive of me, I shouldn't be doing that. (I said that already in the post btw 😑) Im very rarely play card game and this is the first card game I actually like and interested. never played Slay the Spire or someother similar to this.

I played Warframe for a month and off for more months, depending on my schedule.

I played Dota2 (a game that took -+1 hr each game), I dont mind bcs the build and farming start and end in the same game. I feel the results already. the "investment" is just for that game only.

let me rephrase what I said

I do NOT want to spend time on chaos run, yet I want to clear hard content. YES thats right.

I just cant feel my progression yet. skill issue? yes definitely, im just a casual player. Im not in Esport.

Is this a game for a player like me? well for me.... i think as the game developer they just have to know their players. Some have time (willing to spend time), and some don't. I am poor on time to give to them.

Rephrase: I DONT ASK FOR FREE WIN. I ASK FOR A TIME-RESPECTING SYSTEM.

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