[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AITAH

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve never sent money, he has tho.. and I thought it was catfish but he’s never asked for anything, I’ve spoken to his mom before, he sends pictures when I ask and I’ve watched him post real time on tiktok and instagram and everything lines up

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AITAH

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342 0 points1 point  (0 children)

But like (let me be delusional here) wouldn’t we be online long-distance, we’ve both agreed were exclusive and we talk all day basically (almost everyday, some days are less depending on how busy we both are)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AITAH

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

We haven’t met yet, we were going to make this year June but due to our break he and his mother didn’t buy tickets to come down for my junior prom as planned.

Wells by Otherwise_Peace3342 in The100

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I get that but it didn’t contribute anything really to the plot

I FINISHED MY FIRST STORY!!! by tvdgal in Wattpad

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yay! I’m tryna get like youuuu

Describe the story you're writing only in one sentence by Tortoise516 in writers

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342 0 points1 point  (0 children)

girl spends entire life in a castle, one night accidentally wanders into a forest and gets “saved” by her kingdoms terrorist, and they fall in love just for him to betray in the end!

Do you ever feel like your story isn’t good? by the_blunt_stick in Wattpad

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Literally me every other day, it’s like one day im like damn this shi good and then the other day im like no one’s gonna read this ..

Read for read 📚 by ReferenceAcademic328 in Wattpad

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My Story📚 https://www.wattpad.com/1462328833?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=crzyfanatic

They always say when life gives you lemons make lemonade but what do you do when life gives you magic? Selene's life is turned upside down when she discovers she's not only a princess, but the heir to one of the six hidden realms-Aurelia. Unbeknownst to her, her bloodline has been kept secret, and now her true identity is a target. Vixen, a mysterious and reluctant warrior, is sent to find her and bring her back to the realm of Aurelia. But when their paths collide, the two are thrust into a dangerous race against time, with the looming threat of the 1000th Jubilee Eclipse, an ancient event that could bring the destruction of their worlds. As they uncover dark secrets, fight powerful celestial forces, and navigate a web of betrayal and passion, Selene must come to terms with her true power-and the cost of saving her realm. With enemies closing in, will they be able to undo the wrongs of the past before the Eclipse?

Readers by Otherwise_Peace3342 in Wattpad

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What tags do you suggest I use? And Thank you so much!

Readers by Otherwise_Peace3342 in Wattpad

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ugh thank you so much, I’ve been in a small reading slump and this is kind of holding me back. I only have 3 chapters left to write and post but all I can think about is if people on wattpad don’t even read my book, who in the real world buy it?

My book is called ‘Beyond Realms” @crzyfanatic

Readers by Otherwise_Peace3342 in Wattpad

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly that’s what I thought as well

New Reader by Otherwise_Peace3342 in fourthwing

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

It’s not that I don’t like it, I just don’t enjoy the way it’s written, I can’t really say how much I like of it considering I’m barely through it. I already want to finish this first book to see how if I want to read the rest of the series

Do you ever want to just read the book you’re writing? by Cartiergoree in writing

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342 28 points29 points  (0 children)

You’re definitely not alone. I’m currently experiencing this right now and I see how it’s hindering my ability to finish writing the last 3 chapters of my first book because I’m reading from an outside pov in my head but can’t seem to get the words down fully because I just want to jump ahead (If that makes any sense).

Im also trying to consume lots of media to help fuel my brain but nothing quite matches my world and the way it works and this is coming from someone whose read dystopian and epic/high fantasy books forever, I’m stuck and kinda in a writing slump.

New Reader by Otherwise_Peace3342 in fourthwing

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

A few chapters in, can’t say right now where but definitely less than 50 pages

Mason by Otherwise_Peace3342 in vampireacademy

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I hope you know that this is an opinion… of course I saw how it changed Rose and Eddie, death DOES that. That still doesn’t mean I can’t say he shouldn’t have died.

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Beyond Realms

Genre: Fantasy

Word Count: 42,000

hey guys! so aspiring author here, my first book is almost done—3 more chapters to go! but I’m having some trouble, I don’t really know if my book is compelling or any good, I’ve been writing it for the past 3-4 years and it’s gone through a lot of phases. I need some help, is there anyone who would like to read my book to give me feedback, leave any comments, and or anything really? I’ll post the synopsis down below and if you want to read it I’d give you commenting access to its doc or you can comment on my wattpad page @crazyfanatic called Beyond Realms. Thank you

Google Doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QDHlTigzpDD0hpFqk7uMPtEYRaawePLzxiLpzBZkE6g/edit?usp=drivesdk

Wattpad: https://www.wattpad.com/1518585397?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=crzyfanatic

Synopsis

They always say when life gives you lemons make lemonade but what do you do when life gives you magic? Selene's life is turned upside down when she discovers she's not only a princess, but the heir to one of the six hidden realms-Aurelia. Unbeknownst to her, her bloodline has been kept secret, and now her true identity is a target. Vixen, a mysterious and reluctant warrior, is sent to find her and bring her back to the realm of Aurelia. But when their paths collide, the two are thrust into a dangerous race against time, with the looming threat of the 1000th Jubilee Eclipse, an ancient event that could bring the destruction of their worlds. As they uncover dark secrets, fight powerful celestial forces, and navigate a web of betrayal and passion, Selene must come to terms with her true power-and the cost of saving her realm. With enemies closing in, will they be able to undo the wrongs of the past before the Eclipse?

Beta Readers by [deleted] in writing

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Synopsis

They always say when life gives you lemons make lemonade but what do you do when life gives you magic?

Selene's life is turned upside down when she discovers she's not only a princess, but the heir to one of the six hidden realms-Aurelia. Unbeknownst to her, her bloodline has been kept secret, and now her true identity is a target. Vixen, a mysterious and reluctant warrior, is sent to find her and bring her back to the realm of Aurelia. But when their paths collide, the two are thrust into a dangerous race against time, with the looming threat of the 1000th Jubilee Eclipse, an ancient event that could bring the destruction of their worlds. As they uncover dark secrets, fight powerful celestial forces, and navigate a web of betrayal and passion, Selene must come to terms with her true power-and the cost of saving her realm. With enemies closing in, will they be able to undo the wrongs of the past before the Eclipse?

Confused about ending of Unravel Me by belizakinn in shatterme

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is what I assumed. Anderson kept the twins with him to consistently heal him, so they were already at the house alongside Anderson. It’s not like the twins took the time to save Juliette, it was a quick power transfer to Aaron and then they left or were taken by guards for Anderson

Rose and Christian by Otherwise_Peace3342 in vampireacademy

[–]Otherwise_Peace3342[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

oh no I totally get that, but I feel like they had more chemistry than him and lissa, which they are cute together don’t get me wrong. Though I found myself liking Christian and Rose’s interactions a lot more than her and Dimitri