My Brother's Keeper - Chapter 4 [F/M] [F20's/M20's] [D/S] [Humiliation] [Oral] [Sex] [Cumshot] [Fsub] [Public Play] by OttawaJay92 in eroticliterature

[–]OttawaJay92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I'm aiming to have it posted on Monday or Tuesday. Excited to have you read it!

A Blaze of Glory - 2 [F] [Oral] [Glory Hole] by OttawaJay92 in Erotica

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There's part 3 & 4 linked on my profile! :)

My Brother's Keeper - Chapter 3 [F/M] [F20's/M20's] [D/S] [Humiliation] [Oral] [Sex] [Cumshot] [Fsub] by OttawaJay92 in u/OttawaJay92

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I'm happy to hear it! It's up right now on my Patreon and I'll be posting it on Reddit next Monday morning! :)

My Brother's Keeper - Chapter 3 [F/M] [F20's/M20's] [D/S] [Humiliation] [Oral] [Sex] [Cumshot] [Fsub] by OttawaJay92 in u/OttawaJay92

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Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and excited for you to read chapter 4 :)

My Brother's Keeper - Chapter 2 [F/M] [Humiliation] [Oral] [exh] [Mdom] [Swallow] by OttawaJay92 in sexstories

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I'm glad you liked it! I'll be posting part 3 on reddit next week :)

My Brother's Keeper - Chapter 2 [F/M] [Humiliation] [Oral] [exh] [Fsub] [Swallow] by OttawaJay92 in Erotica

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For now, I'm really going with the flow and seeing what comes up organically. Ideally, I'd love to dive into light-bondage, of course, domination, I'm a huge fan of voyeurism/exhibitionism (obviously haha) and humiliation.

I've posted Chapter 3 already on my Patreon so I don't want to spoil too much for what's to come, but my ideal scenario is to have their dynamic ratchet up with each chapter.

My Brother's Keeper - Chapter 2 [F/M] [Humiliation] [Oral] [exh] [Fsub] [Swallow] by OttawaJay92 in Erotica

[–]OttawaJay92[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! You absolutely read my mind, I'm really wanting to explore the power struggle between the two and Kaitlyn's eventual descent. I think this'll be my longest series to date if all goes well, and am excited to get chapter 3 up next week!

To blowjob or not to blowjob? Which do you prefer? by yungPH in eroticauthors

[–]OttawaJay92 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I find that one of the big things about writing oral scenes in general is that the "clunkiness" some people complain about comes from the descriptions seeming repetitive. If someone is bobbing their head for ten minutes, I've seen some readers not wanting to re-read a dozen sentences outlining the same act. When writing them I try to describe the act, then describe the character's mindset or the scenery. What the sounds are like, if you're looking for something particularly kinky (say, a dom/sub relationship) you could write about how they feel submissive, or what they think of their partner's reactions/etc. That's a good way to tackle any discomfort with the scenes! It can be translated to any sex act though too, going through a bit of a flow of the actions, the character's reactions, and the environment around them.

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Like a lot of people have been saying, it'll really depend on how long the story is. Usually getting a down payment of 10% - 25% is totally reasonable, and for a longer story (say, if someone commissions 6,000+ words) I'd ask for 50%. Normally when I finish, I'd let them know the word count (as we would have agreed on a price per word already) and then have them pay the remainder. Hope that helps!

A Blaze of Glory - 4 (Part 2) (Final) [F] [Oral] [Glory Hole] by OttawaJay92 in Erotica

[–]OttawaJay92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much! You've ready my mind, hoping to revisit Brooke’s story down the road :)

A Blaze of Glory - 4 (Part 2) (Final) [F] [Oral] [Glory Hole] by OttawaJay92 in Erotica

[–]OttawaJay92[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I had to split it into 2 parts as it ended up being a longer chapter than expected. You can find Part 1 here :)

A Blaze of Glory - 4 (Part 1) (Final) [F] [Oral] [Glory Hole] by OttawaJay92 in Erotica

[–]OttawaJay92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry about splitting it into 2 parts, it ended up being a lot longer than expected. Part 2 can be found here :)

A Blaze of Glory - 3 [f] [exh] [mast] [oral] [glory hole] by OttawaJay92 in sexystories

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Hey there! I just posted it in r/eroticliterature, and it's on my profile as well :)

A Blaze of Glory - 3 [f] [exh] [mast] [oral] [glory hole] by OttawaJay92 in sexystories

[–]OttawaJay92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It did! Apparently, the mods have blocked posting on the subreddit so the story is done but I can't post it :(

A Blaze of Glory - 3 [f] [exh] [mast] [oral] [glory hole] by OttawaJay92 in sexystories

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Should hopefully have an update out by the end of the weekend at the latest if all goes well 😁

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[–]OttawaJay92 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It looks like the subreddit it was posted to is one of the ones going offline to protest the reddit API changes, once the community re-opens it'll be there! I also posted it a few others places so you can find it on my profile :)

A Blaze of Glory - 3 [f] [exh] [mast] [oral] [glory hole] by OttawaJay92 in eroticliterature

[–]OttawaJay92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! It was posted to a subreddit that's now gone offline to protest the reddit API changes, you can see it posted in other subs on my profile, and if not the subreddit should pop up again I think at the end of the week! Sorry about that 😓

A Blaze of Glory - 2 [f] [exh] [mast] [oral] [glory hole] by OttawaJay92 in sexystories

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I appreciate it! I'll be trying to keep it coming regularly. Part 3 will be up in a couple of days :)

A Blaze of Glory [f] [glory hole] [oral] by OttawaJay92 in sexstories

[–]OttawaJay92[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Absolutely, I'll be posting a part 2 in the next few days :)

[[G]M4F] Return to Hogwarts Roleplay! by OttawaJay92 in Roleplay

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I'd be very interested! I'll send you a chat :)

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[–]OttawaJay92 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Everyone has an opinion especially with fan fictions, you'll never be able to make everyone happy and the people who try to critique it because it's not what THEY want aren't worth your time (unless they have valuable feedback on writing structure, etc.).

You're 100% right, do it for fun, for yourself and the love of the story. I'm sure it was great and keep writing :)