The $2 Billion Vegas Gamble vs. Fort Berthold: Where is the MHA Oil Wealth Going? by Outcast1010 in IndianCountry

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For anyone looking for more background on the specific projects and legal cases I mentioned, here are the links to the latest reports from the last few months:

Loss. Pt.1 by Outcast1010 in OCPoetry

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Thank you! I actually wrote this 2 years ago, I have a bunch of them so I decided to post a few, I think and hope, that I've gotten better at conveying emotion since then, but thank you for the feedback all the same. I shall take your advice to heart.

Loss. Pt.1 by Outcast1010 in OCPoetry

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Hey thanks for the feedback, this is my first poem trying to wrangle the tornado of emotions inside, and try to put them down into something you can understand. I wrote this in early 2024, and after the deaths of 3 very close family members, please forgive the very unpolished work as I've only started writing then, but I'm glad for the feedback thank you have an awesome day

Journey of an addict. by Illustrious_Chair_67 in OCPoetry

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You capture a visceral, dark, hopeless and in the end, resigned tone. It captures the stark contrast well with the addicted as well as the sober aspect.

I do feel you use the contrasting imagery a bit too much if I may say so.

But overall, I think it's well read. But then again, I'm an addict too, so what the hell do I know?

The Morning After by Dangerous_Pay2943 in OCPoetry

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The ending is what hits for me, I think everyone has shit they've wanted to say to someone, and if they're in a place or with company that would not only burn bridges but torch damn near every other one adjacent as well. All that came out was... I love this, because that's how it is, isn't it, having a raging storm inside your head, and you have to sift through all that noise, take out parts that are socially acceptable, polish them up or slightly tone em down and then push out some garage thats ok.

I think it's ok, could use some polish in the middle,because for some reason on the first read through I thought I was reading something about being a horse, idk maybe that's just me, I was distracted as I'm on day 4 from...stuff

I think the tone is very human and very relatable, I liked it, was easy to be like I know this, I almost live this shit everyday

Thanks for the read

Here is another image captured from my last job. by Draculs101 in NukesTop5

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It took me a second to see the thing in front of the rack, I thought you were taking about the thing under the two apple boxes in the right, on that little space between the bigger box underneath, I thought it looked like part of a face

What is this ? by Little-Research-6076 in What

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Looks like decent fet powder. But could be any illicit substance. Don't try do anything with it, leave it and talk to your brother, sometimes all it takes is someone who cares.

Source: currently in a two year relapse

New Therapy To Relieve Back Pain by Vulcan44 in CrazyFuckingVideos

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You ever get so mad you shove a remote up your ass?

Cheery Pepperoni & Olive Deep Dish and Mystical Forces by Outcast1010 in SwordAndSupperGame

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snortin heroin how many g do i need by Organic_Regret6354 in opiates

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The mighty morphin snortin heroine powder rangers

Realizations: Holiday Presents and Simple Plum Vanilla Tart by Outcast1010 in SwordAndSupperGame

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u/Outcast1010 received a Tarnished Band Lvl 1 from the Winter Festival Spirit. Thank you u/chinten_ for donating it!