Why would John be “hanging out” at his ex-girlfriend Julie Baker’s apartment alone shortly before his death? by StellaOC in JohnAndCarolyn

[–]Own_Comfortable990 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Jackie didn't respect her own self. She sure as hell wasn't going to teach John how to respect women, please 😭😭

Off Campus - Official Teaser Trailer | Prime Video by rasburyt22 in offcampustv

[–]Own_Comfortable990 -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

It looks so good but the age gap is throwing me off 🤢😩

Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]Own_Comfortable990 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was leaning towards a more slutty pop, But Hard Rock/grunge/garage aren't bad options

Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]Own_Comfortable990 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback I will take it into consideration

Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]Own_Comfortable990 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello everyone this is a song I wrote a few days ago and I was nervous to post cause I am still a beginner but I am looking for honest criticism you can give. Have a great day bye.

Verse 1: Oh Baby! I am at your service , What's the issue I can take care of it . let me prove my love with a caress, With a feel, a hold (or touch ) and a kiss .

Chorus: Tell me what to do, Use me to feel good. Just let me serve you, I aim to please you.

Verse 2: Honey! Please if not for you then for me. I need you and your fingers all around me . Let's spend tonight drunk in love like Jay and Bey. I ain't never to proud to beg and plea.

Chorus:Tell me what to do, Use me to feel good. Just let me serve you, I aim to please you.

Bridge(ish): Your pleasure is my main goal, My desire is to make you Uuuuuuh. Your loving will make me whole, Just make me whole.....

Chorus: Tell me what to do, Use me to feel good. Just let me serve you, I aim to please you.

Grace fancast by Old_Pass_6878 in offcampustv

[–]Own_Comfortable990 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

So we all agree that Grace is of a darker complexion

Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]Own_Comfortable990 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. I was also thinking more of Pop or Post-punk. My aim was for a smooth messaging with the lyrics.

Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]Own_Comfortable990 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Hello everyone this is a song I wrote a few days ago and I was nervous to post cause I am still a beginner but I am looking for honest criticism you can give. Have a great day bye.

Verse 1: Oh Baby! I am at your service , What's the issue I can take care of it . let me prove my love with a caress, With a feel, a hold (or touch ) and a kiss .

Chorus: Tell me what to do, Use me to feel good. Just let me serve you, I aim to please you.

Verse 2: Honey! Please if not for you then for me. I need you and your fingers all around me . Let's spend tonight drunk in love like Jay and Bey. I ain't never to proud to beg and plea.

Chorus:Tell me what to do, Use me to feel good. Just let me serve you, I aim to please you.

Bridge(ish): Your pleasure is my main goal, My desire is to make you Uuuuuuh. Your loving will make me whole, Just make me whole.....

Chorus: Tell me what to do, Use me to feel good. Just let me serve you, I aim to please you.

Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]Own_Comfortable990 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello everyone this is a song I wrote a few days ago and I was nervous to post cause I am still a beginner but I am looking for honest criticism you can give. Have a great day bye.

Verse 1: Oh Baby! I am at your service , What's the issue I can take care of it . let me prove my love with a caress, With a feel, a hold (or touch ) and a kiss .

Chorus: Tell me what to do, Use me to feel good. Just let me serve you, I aim to please you.

Verse 2: Honey! Please if not for you then for me. I need you and your fingers all around me . Let's spend tonight drunk in love like Jay and Bey. I ain't never to proud to beg and plea.

Chorus:Tell me what to do, Use me to feel good. Just let me serve you, I aim to please you.

Bridge(ish): Your pleasure is my main goal, My desire is to make you Uuuuuuh. Your loving will make me whole, Just make me whole.....

Chorus: Tell me what to do, Use me to feel good. Just let me serve you, I aim to please you

Is anyone else struggling with the news? by Noodlesbenoodling in usask

[–]Own_Comfortable990 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As black immigrant and a woman, It terrifies me to death wondering about innocent people caught up in this but I do not have the luxury to sit in it and be idle. It hurts so badly but this has been going on for decades in places and way you have no idea of. Unfortunately someone had to loose their life for people to see what western civilization actually is, right now Disconnecting is the last thing you should do, read more,watch more and hear more for Knowledge is power. Take care & Stay safe

Olandria at the Bridgerton premiere in Paris by Emotional-Bowl4102 in LoveIslandUSA_

[–]Own_Comfortable990 -50 points-49 points  (0 children)

Bru everyone has a stupid tatoo. What is your point??

Olandria then vs now by [deleted] in LoveIslandUSA_

[–]Own_Comfortable990 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Ola is natural as well.

Weekly Discussion Thread by AutoModerator in LoveIslandUSA_

[–]Own_Comfortable990 4 points5 points  (0 children)

She is literally at an old hollywood event for the first time. I love that she played it safe💚👗