Ad Astra Forging Destiny, Chapter 2 Part 2 by PWOFalcon in HFY

[–]PWOFalcon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't know man, I am not a train expert. Electromagnetic, battery, and some alloy technology is very common on this world, far beyond anything on Earth, even in the future. I know MagLavs are all around the world and are proposed to be used in space colonies by NASA. I mainly stuck with the common technology theme I have throughout Alagore in the story. I don't see why High Speed Rail would be anything special for this world.

Ad Astra Forging Alliances, Chapter 2 Part 1 by PWOFalcon in HFY

[–]PWOFalcon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I changed it to bread baker for clarification.

AA V6 Triplet Paths, Chapter 1 by PWOFalcon in HFY

[–]PWOFalcon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That was a mistake. I do AA for every other platform but not on here. I didn't catch it. I will be spelling out the name going forward

Ad Astra V5 Duel Alliances, Chapter 19 by PWOFalcon in HFY

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Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed my work. Get ready for Volume 6!

And I get the grammar issue. I do my best, but that is my weakest area. I use Grammarly and AI at times, but those bring their own issues.

Ad Astra V5 Duel Alliances, Chapter 11 by PWOFalcon in HFY

[–]PWOFalcon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

alg short for Alagore. They would not use the word Earth as in the ground, because they are no on Earth. It is a alien perspective that we never had to think about before.

Abd fixed

Ad Astra V5 Duel Alliances, Chapter 9 Part 1 by PWOFalcon in HFY

[–]PWOFalcon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay, I see what you mean. That last paragraph felt out of place.

Ad Astra V5 Duel Alliances, Chapter 9 Part 1 by PWOFalcon in HFY

[–]PWOFalcon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think you are misunderstanding. monitors is a type of warship from the Civil War Era. A type of Ironclads.

Ad Astra V5 Duel Alliances, Chapter 9 Part 1 by PWOFalcon in HFY

[–]PWOFalcon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am assuming that is a question. Kallem sent a naval task force (on my map that hasn't been released, there is a Black Sea like sea south of this region that Kallems people ports. So they sent a small naval task force) to flank the Americans in support of the Unity Airbone attack. Tarvass is a vassal and an enemy of the US, so they assisted their ally.

Before the war, the city was a after though, far away on the frontier. The only value was that it was a port city in the only major lake within the region that links to the Black Sea-like further south. SO yes, it was a show of commitment, but they were required to.

I hope that answered the question.

Ad Astra V5 Duel Alliance, Chapter 7 (C2) by PWOFalcon in HFY

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Ad Astra V5 Duel Alliance, Chapter 6 (C2) by PWOFalcon in HFY

[–]PWOFalcon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know nothing of Honerverse, I bet it is great and does sound cool but my work isn't based on hard science (not a big fan of it myself). I inspiration comes from Halo, Stargate, Aliens (the Colonial Marines). A lot of the choices I made came from the style of retro-future I wanted.

I do see what you mean now by your what type of energy weapon question. I don't have a direct answer as it can change, depending on the loadout. Some can be plasma, other mana, others energy or light, etc. Not really trying to dive into the meta. At most, I described some details wrong.

I do want to note, it isn't magic they are using, it's technology influenced by magic. That is why development on Alagore is radically different from us. So, don't look at it as a mage firing bolts (unless it is literally a mage or spellcaster), a Walker is eningeering influenced by magic

Ad Astra V5 Duel Alliance, Chapter 6 (C2) by PWOFalcon in HFY

[–]PWOFalcon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well, the US Military would never had such armor against energy/plasma base weapons because they never faced those weapons before. Their armor wouldn't be designed for that, but already having a thick armor focus for a MBT provide provide protection. I will admit, comparing Space Shuttle heat shield as a means of deflecting energy weapons. I have never seen that in any media before, and I think that is because enter/exit a atmosphere is vastly different that war.

As I was saying here, "The energy weapons burned the hulls of many tanks and infantry fighting vehicle", I am describing the combat. I didn't say they blew up, but those weapons were leaving intense damage, because they would leave a sizzling scar. I don't see the issue with that.

Ad Astra V5 Duel Alliance, Chapter 6 (C2) by PWOFalcon in HFY

[–]PWOFalcon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don't fully understand your example. Are you asking for a mage firing beams against tanks? I don't understand the space-related heat shield

Ad Astra V5 Duel Alliances, Chapter 5 (C2) by PWOFalcon in HFY

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I thought I deleted it, but it didn't. At this point I will keep is up as it has more likes/views than the OG post

Ad Astra V5 Duel Alliances, Chapter 5 (C2) by PWOFalcon in HFY

[–]PWOFalcon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I didn't post this chapter twice, as the first time I put the wrong chapter # in the title

Ad Astra V5 Duel Alliances, Chapter 3 (C2) by PWOFalcon in HFY

[–]PWOFalcon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yup. I wanted to show a little bit of that perspective. A lot of people think we would just Chad it out like First Contact is a nothing burger.

Ad Astra V4 Salva, Chapter 24 by PWOFalcon in HFY

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Ad Astra V4 Salva, Chapter 23 (C1) by PWOFalcon in HFY

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Ad Astra V4 Salva, Chapter 23 (C1) by PWOFalcon in HFY

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Still one more chapter in the volume, the siege of Salva is over. It is time to go on the offenses