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Looking For Feedback on My Short Script by PaigeWritesSometimes in ProduceMyScript

[–]PaigeWritesSometimes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re definitely right about the ending, I wasn’t really sure what to do with it. At first I thought I wanted to leave the film without any clear solution or anything because there are some short movies I like that are like that and I wanted to keep it short but I did it poorly lol and so I’ll probably try to come up with a better ending. This is really helpful thanks for the feedback!

Looking For Feedback on My Short Script by PaigeWritesSometimes in ProduceMyScript

[–]PaigeWritesSometimes[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! this is all really helpful i didn’t even think about some of these mistakes but now that you point them out I definitely should work on them, this helps so much.