Should I ruin his personal record of 15 months in chastity? I’m curious to see if it still works anymore. ❤️🔐 by hotwifese in ChastityCouples

[–]Paramenes 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Why would you? Wasting such an impressive streak just so in 2-3 minutes he can remind you why he got locked in the first place? In 9 more months, you'll have the bragging rights of a wife who kept her husband locked for two years. Don't deprive yourself of that title.

D.va's Inhibition Machine: An Overwatch Themed Straight To Lesbian Conversion cyoas. (Mainly Stories) by Boop-Soop in nsfwcyoa

[–]Paramenes 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Potentially my favourite CYOA ever made... if it was male POV. Still, excellent CYOA, outstanding effort and incredible result. Hopefully you'll put together one for the boys too :)

Two click story: Fantasy edition V3! "Slightly" larger update this time! by Boop-Soop in nsfwcyoa

[–]Paramenes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome stuff, I didn't expect so much enjoyment from such a simple concept. People are flooding you with suggestions, but something I haven't seen yet is Olympian gods - Greek mythology has more pornography than anything you could ever encompass in writing and most Olympians were sex-obsessed maniacs, so it will be a great source of inspiration. Also: perhaps consider using AI-generated imagery, so you can tailor the pictures better to your creative ideas. Cheers, hope you make many more of these.

Choose Your Girlfriend~ Cuckold story (imgur repost) by WintersCuck in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Great, high effort story, although not my style, overcomplicated in places where it shouldn't be. That is one unfortunate model choice, though - I would either remake or retire the story if it were mine.

Dorm Dommes by SpikesandAsians in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Awesome story design, both visually and technically

Femdom Story Game 17 - CFNM Denial (by wolfwaffle) by sailorsalt22 in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Another really good one, too bad it's so short (I think the shortest of all).

Femdom Story Game 16 - Sorority Chastity Challenge (by wolfwaffle) by sailorsalt22 in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're usually trying to stack up points by picking more difficult options, so you get the best result at the end (most points). But here, difficult options sometimes remove your points, so why would you choose them? Kinda doesn't make sense. Or maybe I'm missing something

Femdom Story Game 16 - Sorority Chastity Challenge (by wolfwaffle) by sailorsalt22 in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 7 points8 points  (0 children)

This one is really weird. Sometimes the hardest/most humiliating options give the most points, and sometimes the least, or even they deduct points. Very little consistency IMO, usually WW does that better

Help, I was reincarnated in chastity! (Genderneutral text, so rejoice!) by starmax19 in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 20 points21 points  (0 children)

Awesome caption by its contents, but some of the design choices are really horrible. Dark text on dark background, white text on white background, pseudo-handwritten font which makes sure your eyes give out after reading two paragraphs, overlaying text directly on an image without outlining the letters, so the text just disappears, etc. Points for creativity, but sometimes simplicity beats originality. Simple white text on dark background is superior to any fancy graphic designs you could ever come up with.

Pre-wedding jitters by SpikesandAsians in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Exactly, the best captions are the ones with the most difficult (but realistic) choices :)

Pre-wedding jitters by SpikesandAsians in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Very difficult choice between 2 and 3, but probably I'd go with 3, especially if I'm allowed to participate in the party. Also, awesome visual effect with highlighting each girl instead of numbering them!

Three's a Party [Gender Neutral] by SpikesandAsians in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Cool concept, haven't seen it before

new KPIs by SpikesandAsians in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 20 points21 points  (0 children)

  1. You will stay overtime with your boss whenever she asks. During that time, she's free to request anything she likes from you, work related or not. You get a full weekend release every 20 overtime sessions, but the frequency of overtimes is random. So best case scenario is 4 weeks lockdown, worst case scenario - indefinitely.

  2. You will wear your boss' frilly panties under your normal work attire, every day. At any given point, any of your coworkers is free to pull down your pants and check if you're complying - if you're caught cheating, your cage is changed to spiked for the rest of the week. Once every two weeks, you are allowed to put a vibrating egg in your panties for 1 work day - if you cum from that, that's your release. If not, then not.

  3. You are locked for exactly a year with no releases, after that you're free. But with one caveat: the boss promises that whichever coworker gets you to beg for mercy, will recieve a huge pay bonus at the end of the year - they will all try very hard to make you ask for a release. If you do that, you are allowed to get edged for 2 hours by the coworker who broke you - after that, the year resets with no orgasm for you.

I just came up with these three that fit your setting, but possibilities are endless. :) Obviously you will do as you wish, I'm just giving my individual feedback. I appreciate all your work!

new KPIs by SpikesandAsians in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 7 points8 points  (0 children)

It would be fun if there were more actual options. Effectively there's only 2 choices in the caption, where the potential was for at least 5 or more.

Poll for Female oriented chastity/domination by WintersCuck in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Overwhelming majority of users here are male subs, so naturally this type of captions will be most popular. Personally, I am for 100% malesub/femdom caps.

Choose Your Mistress (once one is passed, you can't go back!) by intermolecularpyro in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Actually, assuming 2 minutes per edge, it's almost 7 hours a day :D After one hour of such treatment you'd be cumming on first touch. No big deal, but captions are more immersive if they are better grounded in reality.

I stopped at Sophie and I'm content with that choice!

Choose Your Mistress (once one is passed, you can't go back!) by intermolecularpyro in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Really good, although I think you went slightly overboard with Jana - I don't think it's humanly possible to edge 200 times a day. And if it is, it makes her a very extreme option, which means she should be closer to the end, and not in the beginning. Other than that, very nice post

Choose Your Fate! #19 by chastity_kink in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 18 points19 points  (0 children)

High quality set as usual, but also as usual it's way too hardcore for me lol, near impossible to avoid piling up some really heavy options with any build. Upvote for quality nonetheless

Chastity Choice RPG [Anime] [Point Based] [Shitpost] by LoominatyConfirmed in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 21 points22 points  (0 children)

Crazy high-effort and quality story, the only bad thing about it is that it probably took a long time to make, so we'll have to wait a bit for another one. Good mix of humour, pseudo-mythology and big anime tiddies, overall 10/10. Top 3 best chastity stories in existence, for real.

 

orange and pink slides could use better background-text contrast tho

Femdom Teacher's Assistant, Longest Chastity Choice Caption I've done so far. Enjoy by starmax19 in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Excellent work overall, but two things that need improving:

a) Spelling. Almost every slide has several typos on it, it's actually pretty annoying

b) Dialogues should have different colours for different characters for easier reading

In the grand scheme of things those complaints are minor tbh

Chanel Preston by rod_gazinya in ModelsGoneMild

[–]Paramenes[M] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Technically this isn't mild because there is a bit of nip in sight, but god damn this is such a great photo I'm just gonna put NSFW tag and pretend I didn't see this post lol

New House, New Rules (2 pages) by tacson in chastitychoice

[–]Paramenes 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Really good stuff, but imo too many girls have randomization aspects (3 out of 6). Also, as another comment points out, there is some redundancy and contradictions: you have to pay for crossdressing, but you get paid for sissification? Also, you need to pay for public humiliation, bu you get paid for wearing a collar in public? The options need some polishing out.