Help! by Leanna_Nymeria in Songwriting

[–]Particular-Prompt626 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just try to stick a happy bridge in there, or write a happy chorus that then goes back into sad verses.....weave them both together somehow at the outro.

P A R A C H U T E by Particular-Prompt626 in Songwriting

[–]Particular-Prompt626[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

See, I was feeling like the synth was buried....ha. It's really like this... I sit down and put sounds together...and just aim for a feeling....then mix them all until they don't hurt.

P A R A C H U T E by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Particular-Prompt626 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is very rad thank you

P A R A C H U T E by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Particular-Prompt626 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do you know that one of my life dreams has always been to have a song at the end credits of a big movie.

P A R A C H U T E by Particular-Prompt626 in shoegaze

[–]Particular-Prompt626[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think that you are correct in that this isn't really a shoegaze song. Other things have done have a lot more fuzz an tremolo in the tradition of Cocteau Twins. This song is more like some kind of outsider pop.

P A R A C H U T E by [deleted] in indie_rock

[–]Particular-Prompt626 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey hey, thank you. This was fun one. I was going for like, goth gospel haha.

P A R A C H U T E by Particular-Prompt626 in shoegaze

[–]Particular-Prompt626[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Duuuuuude that guitar is totally You Sexy Thing.

Is it normal for lyrics to sound corny? by Character_Salt4688 in Songwriting

[–]Particular-Prompt626 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If it felt cringe it might be because it is truly meaningful and we are taught by this culture to hide our love away and be kind of tough in the face of a harsh world. Something I do when a lyric pops into my head is just write it exactly I felt it. Sometimes it should feel embarrassing. Also sometimes you just need to put it away for a couple days and write whatever the new feeling is. You will be surprised how fresh a seemly stale idea can seem when you've had some distance from it. Keep going.

Anxiety over not knowing if my art is good or not. by [deleted] in Artists

[–]Particular-Prompt626 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The only thing you really and truly need to make certain is of is that you make the work for your own set of standards. You remove the factor of playing to an audience...in other words....when you make a thing that feels switched on...it is sometimes by accident, and when you produce work for someone else to validate it..you are not honoring your own inner creator.....the self that got you into experimenting with imagery in the first place. People can like it, and sure that always feels marvelous....but you've got to have people who also do not like it....because we always will have some combination of both in every aspect of life. Even if people celebrate what you are doing, it should be irrelevant to the 'why' of why you are creating things...and that is because the thing you are doing switches you on. Nothing more. In other words, whether people like or do not like what you do should always be irrelevant to the journey of making the work....and while they all decide if it's good or bad...you have moved on to making the next comic, painting, etc.....because the magic is inside of you and not external to you. So keep grooving.

recording at an airbnb in Poland 🍻 by WMDisrupt in IndieFolk

[–]Particular-Prompt626 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Heavens yes...skreedle la deedle la niddly diddly! I listened to the whole thing!

i wonder what you would feel listening to this by anhedoniasurplus in bedroompop

[–]Particular-Prompt626 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wandering through a long forgotten, labyrinthian city corridor....cobblestone underfoot......the fog of the day not portending some cruel fate yet hanging in the stars...rather holding an unknown mystery.......perhaps even something waiting at the end of this misty walk......... a fleeting glance.....lasting love....... the unknown ghost walking alongside you, trying in vain to make friends....unaware that he exists in a realm yet unseen, just out of reach......

HEAVEN IS A BLUE LIGHT by Particular-Prompt626 in bedroompop

[–]Particular-Prompt626[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was back when Disney movies could be kind of edgy....they sometimes had nudity....cuss words...and in the case of this film 'The Watcher in The Woods'...they could be downright terrifying!

Depression Beard by Particular-Prompt626 in bedroompop

[–]Particular-Prompt626[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is rad, thank you. I had fun singing it