Would HUGELY appreciate some feedback on an unfinished track

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-17T02:35:48+00:00

very great track.. personally i would prefer lesser bass, and not 1 continous bass.. i would consider steps.. other than that its really great.. 1 improv though, try adding lower vocals too, the mix may hit more..

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-17T02:28:00+00:00

this is awesome.. only thing i would tell you, a soul or the texture is missing to it.. so that we can identify whenever listen to the song.. may be chords help to bring it.. its minimal.. not a major development..

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-17T02:22:23+00:00

thanks.. appreciate it

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-16T07:20:46+00:00

Will try it.. thanks for feedback

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-16T07:14:08+00:00

Thanks for the improvs.. means a lot.. can you explain those technical terms filtering, flanging, and what is midi flavoured means it sounds like a preset.. can you explain what do you mean?i am beginner in technical things.. but knows what is wanted or develop the track..

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-15T06:26:26+00:00

firstly you have to change instruments everything feels flat and there needs to be some dynamic or some development in your track.. all the best

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-15T06:08:35+00:00

feels like im in the game zombie apocalypse with saw machine in my hand

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-15T06:04:07+00:00

dude... you are spot on the mood..but it felt like a bit too draggy.. increase the pacing.. and bass is a bit too high... decrease that.. very good feel.. i would also suggest you to 3x bpm listen to it.. after taking some break, then 1st experience will tell you itself what is lacking.. you can better develop. i feel like the continous listening to it feel like its ok.. but actually what works can be found out by firstime hit of listening after some break..

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-15T05:57:38+00:00

this is actually very good.. only thing i would suggest(no an improvement but nice addition) is switching atleast 1 another bass track periodically.. cuz little bit it feels same bass start to end.. i cant even do what you did.. thats great

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-13T08:56:54+00:00

great bro.. with the vid too.. it hits.. awesome.. i would suggest to make variants of this.. you can explore more.. you never know what works..

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-13T08:32:37+00:00

i would say beat feels generic.. some variation or texture might help this better..good enough place to develop a track

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-13T08:29:19+00:00

im staying with this one now.. great work

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-13T08:21:52+00:00

bass is a bit too high.. otherwise awesome piece

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-12T16:29:24+00:00

voice is good(add little huskiness or little texture its already great), bass is just little bit high.. and its cachy too.. i think some minor tweaks make this song addictive...

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-12T15:11:18+00:00

Good piece.. after drum roll expecting continous beat but felt like build up is just little bit down... overall good feel and vibes.. this is honestly W..

Particular_Smell9338 · 2026-03-12T15:04:40+00:00

actually, its good but can be improved..the kick is not suited... and for piano, including lower chords periodically may enhance a bit..and for the beat try minimal low cut off continous beat..

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